Kurupts
First I would like to say thank you for stopping by and trying my novel it means a lot to me who has loved light novels for years and wanted to try and make one myself. Second This is my first original novel so please tell me if I made any mistakes or how I can improve as a author and make this story better for you guys! Thank you.
Just wanna come back and state that the true plot begins on chapter 45. The 44 chapters were just a introduction and a funny way to start off my novel and have you guys meet some main characters. There will be more important characters later on so please stay up to date with the chapters. Thank you so much for coming this far with me, I have had a blast writing this book so far and I don’t intend to stop anytime soon!
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!
I scored most 3stars other then character development. I can’t get over the fact that a 6 year old is out fighting a wolf with a carving knife. No one seemed to care, I mean sure this is a different culture. Things might pick up later but between this and the rate of release it’s just not worth my time.
Y DID U STOP WRITING?? I LOVE THIS BOOK AND NOW THERES NOTHING MORE TO READ!! Y IS IT THAT ALL OF THE BOOKS THAT CAME OUT AT THE SAME TIME R JUST CUTTING OFF THE BOOK AND JUST ENDING IT!! I HATE IT SO MUCH!!! IF UR NOT GOING TO FINISH THE BOOK THEN TAKE IT DOWN BECAUSE ITS JUST A HUGE DISAPPOINTMENT!!
so ur not going to keep up with it anymore? I loved it. if ur not going to keep up with it or just end it like this why even start it? you get people to read it and like it or even fall in love with it but then u just stop... I really don't want it to stop I wan to keep going and have a proper end and no just cut off or stop