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can you imagine if they lived near the pacifist ocean?
did he just make eminence in shadow? 😂
i gave the story about 35 chapters to see if there was an overarching BBEG at least but there was none. The initial foray into the other world happened quickly and it almost lulls you into thinking things will happen.I will commend the author on excellent grammar, it is honestly the best part of this novel.
the story starts off great with the typical banished prince troupe. not necessarily played out but not revolutionary either. The MC routinely does things that needlessly make situations more complicated but plot armor is his number 1 tool.all of that could be forgiven if not for the constant grammatical errors. Read this during the 24 hr free period because otherwise I can't see spending coins on chapters.small addition: i didn't expect to get so annoyed by the use of Huck 😂
why does he refuse to upgrade the system!? 😂
lily
a decent start and I wish the author well. locked chapters after 16, with one of the chapters being a repeat is a little off-putting. the soul merge came out of left field but didn't serve anything extra outside of keeping the mc alive. I'm sure this will be fleshed out but how would we get invested enough to care with only 15 chapters?i would say this is a decent attempt at an apocalypse novel and I may pick it up again in the future.
you made the lion sin of pride 😂
first, this author has captured lightning in a bottle. the cultivation isn't anything groundbreaking but it doesn't have to be.if i had one wish it would be increased efforts for editing. after chapter 40, you'll find yourself editing misspelled words or eliminating unnecessary words in every chapter.
i love the idea of thunder rocs