Snowstar
I really like the story and the characters (Love azzy and claire) but no matter how I think but reaching the end of this novel will be a challenge for the author. There are so many possibilities that it's complicated to see in which direction the novel will go (Ps I still have my little idea) In any case congratulations to the author for his work and can't wait to see the rest . is There a discord? And sorry for my bad english.
I don't mean to criticize author but it's my third time I picked this book to read but dropped on first chapter where mentioned 1000 years ago means hero's clan dead hero gone and we get generalised ending here and my mood to down and i dropped book . life already had many complications don't want to think more in my leisure too
I would like to appriciate the author work. There are a little bit mistakes here and there but considering that authors native language is not english so it is understandable but the thing which is bad is that you are displaying story of the angel 'Azrael'. You see, this is the thing that is not good here. If your novel become popular (it would most likely happen, i hope so) then there will be more haters than your lovers(fans) so if you like to hear my suggestion than i'll very pleased which is that you change the name of mc, story can go on as it is. I know it will be hard considering the chapters than it would simply be a masterpiece