I would like to appriciate the author work. There are a little bit mistakes here and there but considering that authors native language is not english so it is understandable but the thing which is bad is that you are displaying story of the angel 'Azrael'. You see, this is the thing that is not good here. If your novel become popular (it would most likely happen, i hope so) then there will be more haters than your lovers(fans) so if you like to hear my suggestion than i'll very pleased which is that you change the name of mc, story can go on as it is. I know it will be hard considering the chapters than it would simply be a masterpiece

Get well soon bro

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اخی سلام کہ وہ اس کے بعد اس نے کہا کہ وہ اس کے کے آغا نے کہا کہ وہ اس کے بعد اس نے کہا کہ وہ اس کے بعد اس نے کہا کہ وہ اس کے بعد اس نے کہا کہ وہ اس کے بعد اس نے کہا کہ وہ اس کے بعد اس نے کہا

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نخرہ میں نے تو اس کا مطلب یہ ہے کہ اس کے بعد اس نے اپنے ایک بیان میں کہا گیا ہے کہ وہ اس کے بعد اس نے کہا کہ وہ اس کے بعد اس نے کہا کہ وہ اپنے آپ

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Very good character development and suggest you all to read it was it was a nice time reading itVery good character development and suggest you all

You look like a dedicated fan

Good chapter.

I recently started to read novels and i havent read many and this was my second one and its really good dont know about other but i really appriciate the author's work. Best of luck.