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My Protective Brother Becomes My Domineering Lover

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{ WARNING: MATURE CONTENT, READ AT YOUR OWN RISK } Do you know how it feels having a protective brother who cares for his younger sister? It’s great isn’t it? That’s exactly how Samantha feels when Alex jumps into her rescue, she feels secured knowing her brother is always there to help her, but it also becomes suffocating when Alex is being too protective ******* "I'm fine Alex! It's becoming annoyingly difficult to make you understand sometimes!"Sam angrily stood up from her seat and walked out of the room as she forcefully shut the frame door close, a loud thud was heard from it. I looked at Alex , his brows creased as he clenched his fist into a round ball but still looking even more handsome than before, he must be feeling annoyed due to Sam's behavior just now "Errm, I think Sam just need some breathing space for a while, she'll come around soon" I said to Alex trying to comfort him from Sam's harsh words. " I can see how much you care for Sam but I think she'll be fine without you always there to help, I'll be going to class now also, so just take care" I said to him but he still didn't say a single word his hold on the chair not releasing,veins popping up, down his arms as he held tightly unto the chair. ****** That’s the way Sam feels when her brother is being protective. But what happens when a hidden secret from the past is found by one of the children of the wealthy family in LA Mr and Mrs Anderson, and her protective brother becomes her domineering lover ? What could that be ? Let’s watch and see… or rather Let’s read and see ! I hope you enjoy!!

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