Tengu_San
interesting read! the first chapter is so adorable but then you get to be sucker punched with a heart wrenching death.. the first chapter for me was like a slowburn read but once you get past that the real stuff gets super interesting. kudos to the author and keep updating and posting new chapters! :)
Wow wow wow! This novel is fantastic! Right from the very start you are gripped with emotions, fantastically written characters, turmoils, and mysteries! I have to admit, the first chapter alone almost broke me, I was so sad with how quickly the plot turned tragic- the poor protagonist! But that is the mark of a really good author- this novel really makes you feel! I really enjoyed the switch to fantasy, and how the protagonist was forced to adapt to his new life and body, the author handled it really well! What's more the other characters are also really well scripted, and not glossed over like I see with a lot of novels. Some artful description, along with some fantastic world building (and even maps from the author) made this story really immersive and enjoyable to read! I could very easily binge read this! Truly, I was blown away. Author, you must teach me your skills!
Okay, so i've read the first couple of chapters - and so far, i like it! There is a lot of grammatical errors (i pointed one out), but it's actually not that bad, considering that english isn't your first language. Throughout the chapters, i can sense the hours you've spent creating the ''new world'' he appears in, and the characters, which is so cool! Keep up the good work! <3
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This book suffers from most of the usual grammar and typo errors most novels have. The author boldly claims his world building is good. Which is true. However his characters are pretty bad. The interactions are far too childish for the dark themes he tries to use to give his story more depth. Overall this isn’t a bad read but could be better
mc should just go around killing the slave traders... as a warning to the others, it would help deter them... and maybe later kill the ones with slave... btw, this has been okay... I haven't gone too deep in the story, it isn't really that dark... so if you think dark novels are scary... you can actually read this
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Thank God this novel doesn't have a tragedy tag, as the author is very good at creating charismatic characters (I really sympathized with his first family) * Congratulations for the originality, because in all the stories I've read, the protagonist had a horrible frist life. But who said it should be like that?
I love this story. honestly. maybe I'm not the most eloquently spoken, or able to describe myself well, but the author always makes sure to try and keep a consistent schedule, keeps exciting chapters coming out, and never leaves us hanging on one spot for too long. if you are on the fence about reading, and not sure if you should, do it. you will quickly find that it's worth every single one of your power stones.