Reviews of My Multiverse Trip
My Multiverse Trip
Ryan_Colman
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So like he has multiple different abilities but they apparently are just filler text because he doesn't really make good use of them, the author gives him certain abilities like the gamers mind yet he still passes out from fear of heights and other such things so it's like he doesn't even have it. The author writes in big blocky paragraphs making it hard to read. Overall there is so many inconsistencies, inconveniences(the paragraph size and punctuation), and even though the mc has apparently trained he still basically comes off as weaker than Ron. The only thing really going for the story is the amount of chapters and the update frequency. While I personally liked the premise of the story, and the general abilities he got, its sadly ruined by how the mc uses (or doesn't use) his abilities, and the way the mc acts.
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I hate his character. Like he is able to become op but nooooo, and than he is being a pussy fanboy so much that I can't take it and he trying to be a king what a joke. and really helping the main cast which is risking his own life just for your tv/novel character when you don't even know them personally, I just can't take it.
would have been great novel if author didn't think with his di ck and stop the **** harem would have been great novel if author didn't think with his di ck and stop the **** harem would have been great novel if author didn't think with his di ck and stop the **** harem would have been great novel if author didn't think with his di ck and stop the **** harem would have been great novel if author didn't think with his di ck and stop the **** harem
I had high hopes for this novel by the number of chapters but sadly I don't think I'll be reading more. Reading a block of text including dialogue isn't really my kind of tea. The only upside I've noticed is the number of updates is high. Author tried to make the MC unique by trying to balance him by not being too OP even with 3 systems but he never really uses it. Story Development and World Background are pretty much the same as cannon. Overall if you want something to read without thinking this is for you but for those who have read about the Shadow Hack system, The Gamer and Bringing a farm to another world you may be disappointed by what the Author has done.
TLDR: The story causes frustration, it's like having a huge dick and willing partners but your dick is too big to fit, so although you have a huge dick it is practically useless. ______________________________________________________ Good upload speed and content volume. Initial premise and wishes are also interesting. Character growth in power and wisdom is practically non existent, severely underutilized system/wishes. Needlessly risking the MC and the other characters, the MC has the knowledge and skills (both system and self trained) but for some reason the story progresses as if it wasn't even there. The formatting needs work, the lack of commas and walls of text is an issue, but can be easily fixed via an editor. Overall the author has a beastly typing speed, and good ideas. However, needs an editor and someone to guide the story with proper progression in order ensure that the MC is not complete broken, keeps track of the MC's capabilities and doesn't behave like an idiot just to somehow stick with the OG plot and characters.
People haven't seemed to read the synopsis all the way down this is basically a rough draft that I threw together on a whim with zero writing experience the first 20 chapters are pretty crap as that's like the beginning of the beginning of me learning wtf to do I get it spacing punctuation and all that and yes the Mc is gunna be an idiot this is for comedic purposes and to show a human side in my novel get over it he's not just gunna get everything right the first time around he's got to Hone what's he's doing and of course he's not going to take it seriously at he's just going to mess around at times he's here to have fun mainly. But someday he will get serious.
Ugh, it's not bad..... It's hard to read because there is a wall of text, but not to much. The worst problem is story is boring. I just skip most of it, because let's be honest, hp is not something remotely interesting. Especially when all magic related stuff just skipped and trained. Mc is another problem, he is such generic guy, and totally degenerate, that I was rooting for basilisk or troll to claim his life. No ambitious, no desires, nothing to speak about. Harem? Small and nothing to speak about. Others characters? Their is not much dialogs between them. Mc? I will help all good guys because I'm such a nice guy. Future of story? I guess helping heroes and following Canon..... Ugh, the most funny thing, seeing Canon scene with new character, trying to guess where to stand.
It's a good novel that has a lot of potential but in all honesty the Mc needs a lot more spine .he does t have the mc vibe and is basically ............ I mean it's ok if you dnt want the mc to be op too fast but at least dont.XOXO HIM...like he is afraid of flying and roller coaster ?????? Did he really live in America in his last life ??? Plus he is supposed to be 30 years mentally but he doesn't behave like one ,even though he is now a kid that shouldn't take away his wisdom of the years he lived and last but not the least If you want to keep people interested you need to atleast show us some of his development over the course of the years ,cause the way I see it the mc can't change the future plot if he keeps growing this slowly. Apart from that it's a good novel.😤😤😤
