Review Detail of BEASTMASTER9999999 in My Multiverse Trip

So like he has multiple different abilities but they apparently are just filler text because he doesn't really make good use of them, the author gives him certain abilities like the gamers mind yet he still passes out from fear of heights and other such things so it's like he doesn't even have it. The author writes in big blocky paragraphs making it hard to read. Overall there is so many inconsistencies, inconveniences(the paragraph size and punctuation), and even though the mc has apparently trained he still basically comes off as weaker than Ron. The only thing really going for the story is the amount of chapters and the update frequency. While I personally liked the premise of the story, and the general abilities he got, its sadly ruined by how the mc uses (or doesn't use) his abilities, and the way the mc acts.