Review Detail of Koahla in My Multiverse Trip

TLDR: The story causes frustration, it's like having a huge dick and willing partners but your dick is too big to fit, so although you have a huge dick it is practically useless. ______________________________________________________ Good upload speed and content volume. Initial premise and wishes are also interesting. Character growth in power and wisdom is practically non existent, severely underutilized system/wishes. Needlessly risking the MC and the other characters, the MC has the knowledge and skills (both system and self trained) but for some reason the story progresses as if it wasn't even there. The formatting needs work, the lack of commas and walls of text is an issue, but can be easily fixed via an editor. Overall the author has a beastly typing speed, and good ideas. However, needs an editor and someone to guide the story with proper progression in order ensure that the MC is not complete broken, keeps track of the MC's capabilities and doesn't behave like an idiot just to somehow stick with the OG plot and characters.