Reviews of MOVIE WORLD'S ARCHVILLAIM
MOVIE WORLD'S ARCHVILLAIM
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This story needs a re-write, it's almost impossible to read coherently, mainly due to the very bad grammar that makes the story make no sense. Author please get a beta reader/editor to help with your grammar and sentence structure because I would like to read this story, the premise is very interesting to me.
First of all I would like to say kudos to the translator for the great job on making the novel readable the effort for editing and correcting some mistakes on the novel is greatly appreciated by everybody. Now into the novel, maybe its just me but I cant really relate/portray myself as the protagonist of the story even though I like anti-hero/villain-centric type of story, maybe because the protagonist doesnt have any real motivation I guess on becoming or transitioning into the villain that he is trying to portray, theres no ideal, just doing evil just for the sake of doing evil and it feels kind of shallow. I mean sure maybe the sense of urgency of his life being take away in case of failure, but thats just it nothing more. I mean sure joker does the most heinous crime for the sake of sometimes just pure chaos, but he can sell that as his ideal and unique characteristic because he is potrayed as insane, and insane people doesn't follow the rules that were set up by the progressing society. And now lets return to the protagonist, in my opinion the way he is doing things feels like just throwing a tantrum on the society for getting a bad hand on his life, it feels like he just seeking attention and is just putting up a facade, and I think hes kind of detached from the current "reality" he is in and just playing around it as game just to cope up on the mistreatment he received from the society although unintentionally from his past life. But oh well maybe im just reading to much into things and maybe this is some just guilty pleasure self fulfillment type of novel that the author is expressing his/her violent tendencies for one cant just ask in a violent way in our current society 🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️
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