Reviews of Mmlllmmmllm
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Very good reading of the novel, I like it a lot, although personally I don't like some comic moments that make the MC seem like the typical fearful and princess MC, the rest is fine, although it is expected Wait for a harem or the author is going to make the MC act like the MC of douluo or battle for heaven, where he could have chosen everyone but he only chose one. Well, from the partial talk, there is the imp Impartial, it is a very good novel above the average of the fanfic of this novel, most do not finish it (...), they mix it with other things that end up forced, they don't know how to do personalities, etc.,...I look forward to more of this reading.
Excelente en todo, es solo mi opinión, pero tiene un gran potencial de desarrollo, se centra en el desarrollo del MC y sus objetivos, haciéndose valer de sus relaciones y sus habilidades, no sigue el canon, no es simp de los personajes principales del canon, busca la superación individual y colectiva, excelentes juegos psicológicos, buena personalidad de los personajes, semejante a la realidad. 10/10
Nothing much to say but… huh it’s not bad and a well made fan fic as it’s pretty thought out and meshed together with the storyline of the novel. Overall, I don’t got much to say but the story that is made so far is good and entertaining for a first time story by the author. Anyway, hope you can continue this and rise up the ranks dear author.
the story is as u can see is COTE, so nothing to tell about that, my main problem is with lot of inconsistencies in the story, like his behavior, and lot of plot holes, where he does thing which he should not be able to, like when profiling horikita, he tells her date of birth too, which shouldn't be possible, and about her problem with her brother, which again is not possible, because she didn't met with him, and mc has never went with horikita after college to even read her body movements or expressions or anything such, when a variable like her brother might be in her mind.
