Review Detail of JollyBottomDweller in Mmlllmmmllm

Nothing much to say but… huh it’s not bad and a well made fan fic as it’s pretty thought out and meshed together with the storyline of the novel. Overall, I don’t got much to say but the story that is made so far is good and entertaining for a first time story by the author. Anyway, hope you can continue this and rise up the ranks dear author.