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the story is as u can see is COTE, so nothing to tell about that, my main problem is with lot of inconsistencies in the story, like his behavior, and lot of plot holes, where he does thing which he should not be able to, like when profiling horikita, he tells her date of birth too, which shouldn't be possible, and about her problem with her brother, which again is not possible, because she didn't met with him, and mc has never went with horikita after college to even read her body movements or expressions or anything such, when a variable like her brother might be in her mind.

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