Dream_blue98
Don't usually read romance but this was pretty enjoyable, the main character is strong willed, much better than trashy weak willed throughout whole story type of mc, descriptions and execution of plot points done well too, what drags the story down is the mediocre writing quality, I can tell the author tries hard in his descriptions and depictions but wether it is because of English being a secondary language or lack of knowledge on the written word, the word choice and sentence structure is not that great, quite a bit of grammatical errors too, I would recommend you work on your writing quality, because everything else is good.
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It definitely has potential, it kept me intrigued enough to keep going which is good, though I admit I had to adjust at first when I noticed recurring errors, eventually I was able to interpret what was meant and it became an easy read. Wasn't even sure what direction the story would go, since I normally don't read this specific genre, but I honestly still enjoyed it, keep it going!
It's a great story, fun and easy to read since there is beauty in simplicity, nonetheless, I don't think you sorta failed to deliver the story as a reader that is great. I like how the MC is generous and sophisticated. Tho just friendly advice try to reduce repeated words to describe the same thing, use a bit strong verbs and lessen your adverbs and lastly add a cliffhanger at the end of every chapter. I'm rooting for you, good luck.
From the very beginning, the reader can feel that author has a concept for the whole story. I like the FL, she has a strong character. The plot is interesting. Just be care full with punctuation. In some places, we need a sentence of explanation, especially when you describe the background. I don't mean to 'sell' the story, but just give the reader some clues or a little bigger picture.
This is good. I've always loved royalty themed story so it is easy to be immersed in this. I hope it gets better because I could already feel the looming danger in the next chaps. Aside from some sentence structures and grammar errors, I really saw its potential especially that the world building is constructed well and not to forget that there's some mysteries to look forward to. Kudos, author!
Hmm another book from author. The story is amazing with Catchy First few chapters. I have read other book of the author. which is also a great book, one of my favorite. I can say that author has improved much then before. please update more chapter. good work dear author. keep it up. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
captivating story. love all the characters even the villains. it keeps me wanting to stay up reading. now let's hope I'm not disappointed because it doesn't get completed. that would really suck for a good story not to get complete and a waste of my coins that I keep wasting on novels that starts good but don't get complete. I really like this story and I'm going to have a bit of faith in this author to complete it.
This work is extremely entertaining and while the grammar and spelling isn't perfect it is still for the most part very well written. The plot is interesting and accumulative, and the characters are very well developed (although I didn't really like Donavan being a flirt and inappropriate in the beginning, it tainted his character for me). Silja on the other hand is lovable all the way throughout.