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Mine Everlasting

Have you ever tried to read My Immortal and just couldn't get past the bad writing? Do you want to actually understand the insane plot? Welcome to Mine Everlasting, the longest My Immortal rewrite (as far as I can tell). Come enjoy meeting all your favorite characters from Harry Potter all over again, but this time they're goth and have none of the personality from the original canon! I'm here for you as I rewrite all of My Immortal to be intelligible. Inspired by My Immortal by Tara Gilesbie.

LemonxLark · Book&Literature
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15 Chs

Chapter 8- "where I had lost my virility to Draco"

"I know that you've been calling my guy

Are you crazy?

Now I'm gonna take you outside

And show you crazy

Ooh, I got your crazy"

-Crazy Possesive by Kaci Battaglia

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Everyone in the potions room turned to look at me, but I ignored them and continued, "Come fight me, you son of a bitch!"

Professor Snape looked over from where he was helping another student, slowly looked me up and down, then sighed, "What do you want today, Ebony?"

Before I could reply that I wanted Vampire's head on a stake, Draco burst through the doorway, yelling, "Please Ebony, its not what you think!" I turned, and saw him standing frozen, completely nude, as some of the preppy girls in the class giggled.

I flipped him off, then turned to find Vampire again. I spotted him across the room, sitting by my friend B'loody Mary Smith, looking like he was trying to disappear.

Target acquired.

I leapt over a table, and I saw Vampire start to get up. As he sprinted toward the door I intercepted, and slammed him into the wall. Vampire yelled at me to let him go. I found myself staring into his face as I grabbed onto his robes, my hands pressing him against the wall. Snape had pulled out his wand threateningly, and was clearly asking me to let him go. My anger returned in full. How dare they treat someone like me this way!

I glared into Vampire's red eyes as I demanded, "Why the fuck did Draco cheat on me with you?"

Everyone gasped.

I heard a voice from behind me. "Ebony, please listen to me. I did date Vampire for a while two years ago, but we broke it off. There's nothing between us now!" Draco said, gently putting a hand on my shoulder. Vampire chimed in, agreeing with Draco's statement, but I couldn't trust either of them at the moment.

"Yeah right, you fucking cheating bastard!" I screamed, reaching my breaking point. I ran out of there, pushing Draco out of the way as hard as I could. Without even realizing it, I ran through the forbidden forest until I slowed, out of breath, by the tree Draco and I first made love on. There I broke down, sobbing into the trees rough bark, wondering why I had to fall for Draco.

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God I wish any one of my classes in high school had been this dramatic. Like a girl just walking in to beat the shit out of a guy and her boyfriend comes in naked to stop her. Fucking classic.