edgy_incel
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I have read the greatest novel on webnovel.
one of the best and the most interesting fanfic that I ever read. the plot kinda light and easy to understand with minimal hole. need more detail but overall it wont disturb the anjoyment when reading it while the story progressed. cant wait to read more this novel till the end of the story. nice job author
if this novel keeps going like this she will be one of the best fanfics that I ever read let's start with the Writing Quality 4 stars she is good there are no mistakes that I could point to because I'm using a translator second for the Stability of Updates 5 stars because we get over a chapter a day the Story Development 4 stars in the best it's not fast or slows it could be better but I'm satisfied with this and the Character Design 4 stars is one of the best things in this novel because the Character is well written World Background: there is not much I could say because there is just 28 chapter but will see in the future
This is a great story! The way the social link works to empower the MC is perfect!!! The only problem I could point out would be how inhumane the MC seems to not be bothered to see a massacre and hundreds of corpses. I understand that he doesn't feel guilty about killing and doesn't even bother with death, since the MC's circumstances seem to affect him a little, making him accept death as natural and not bother him, the problem is that he doesn't not even feel queasy watching people get their heads blown off. Another point that could be improved would be the somewhat rushed way in which the Arcana of death was developed, I would have preferred it to have taken longer given the person with whom he developed this social link being someone experienced who should not bond with people so easily. I know I talk a lot about these two negatives, but honestly they are minor issues that stand out because everything else is good, not perfect but good. In general this is really a very good fanfic and I feel that even in just 18 chapters I could see that instead of getting worse like many fanfics do, this one actually gradually got better. While the beginning was not so good, the story until chapter 18 showed good progress and unfolded very well.