LucasTrauman
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LucasTrauman3dCommentedDon't you dare go hallow!
Don't you dare go hollow!- LucasTrauman3dCommented
I think you can be proud to say that this is one of the best first stories someone has made in a while. Many who are first starting out make absolute garbage so well done.
Overall, I am pleased with what I created for my first story. Rapturous Rhapsody may not be perfect, but it is mine. - LucasTrauman3dCommented
Lies once more, at least an 8 out of 10 compared to all other books. This story has a lot of depth, and well thought out planning which many other books do not.
As a story (compared to published works): 5 out of 10. - LucasTrauman3dCommented
lies again, at least a 9 out of 10 as it is among the best that i have ever read. Look at my account I've read many.
As a fanfiction: 7 out of 10 - LucasTrauman3dCommented
lies, 10 out of 10 seeing as it's the best ever made
As a story based on the Waifu Catalogue, 9 out of 10 - LucasTrauman3dCommented
I'm glad you stood by it. It felt new, and unique.
Still, looking back, I stand by it. Not only because I do think it gave me a better grasp of the 'waifus' and practice writing their characters, but also because I still think too much of fanfiction, especially self-insert fanfiction, is simply a repeat of canon events. - LucasTrauman12dCommented[Share Opinion: In the cannon Narcissa was somewhat a grey character. She saved Harry's life once. Maybe since looking at the power fighting on Harry's side Voldemort's win was the easy guess, she had no other choice but to follow Lucius. What if there was a different chance available to her? To get herself a freedom? TELL ME DO YOU WANT AN EVIL NARCISSA MALFOY OR A NARCISSA WHO WANT HERSELF FREE FROM LUCIUS AND VOLDEMORT CLUTCHES]
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- LucasTrauman1mthCommentedNicholas stared at the jumping dark haired lady in a strange glittery red and blue dress? with a visible deadpan... Was this really why he was called to the central command room?
- LucasTrauman1mthCommentedA unit of suspiciously short legionaries with even more suspiciously red ears let out a series of gleeful cackles as they start bombarding the patch of forest housing the rangers with firebolts and in some cases even fireballs.
- LucasTrauman1mthCommented(Yeah, she is still 17 as today in PokeWack World is still January the 2nd, just one day after New Year. Meanwhile her 18th birthday is only 2 days later on January the 4th.)
- LucasTrauman1mthCommentedBy the way, the PokeGear in this PokeWack World somehow looks like those PokeGears in Pokemon Heart Gold and Soul Silver.
- LucasTrauman1mthCommentedYeah, unlike in those Pokémon games where the player characters are only 10 years old, here in PokeWack World everyone begun their adventures when they reach the age of 18. Who in the right mind would let a 10 years old kid controlling a fire breathing monster roam the world freely without any restraint and guidance from their parents or guardians anyway, right?
- LucasTrauman1mthCommented[Without further ado, Welcome to the PokeWack World!!!! Let your adventure begin!!!!]
- LucasTrauman1mthCommented[Notes from the Gods: In the PokeWack world which you are about to enter, you will embark on an adventure accross the lands and seas with you, the Chosen One, as the hero.]
- LucasTrauman1mthCommentedYeah, this chapter is actually heavily inspired from the opening prologue in a fanmade Pokemon game with this title: Pokemon Wack. Of course I make some difference in the six choices available for the players to choose at the start.