Reviews of Lilim Heritage Online

I spotted this after reading something else and thought, eh seems interesting. AND IT IS. Its actually pretty damn awesome so far and i am really keen to read more.

This novel is a hidden gem When i look at the pic kinda turn off cuz not fan of macha or games but when i read the first 10 chapter wow this is not your typical macha/vr this is new but in good side just one thing why 1/day :") waiting for more sir And i dont know why this novel aint got to top 50 cuz most the top 50 just you know average?? Anyway thank you author and keep your work i Support you for this

I've always loved stories that create a new unique world or completely new use of old ideas. This story does that. There are some tropes, but the story refines what makes those tropes used while adding his own unique elements into the story. He makes the characters likeable, I personally really like Dove and Tama, and makes the reader invested in the story. The mix of events with weight and humor within the book really has me waiting for and enjoying each chapter produced. The only complaint I really have is the writing quality. It picks up after the beginning, but there are still some chapters containing grammar mistakes which can be jarring in the middle of the story.

I’ve really been enjoying reading this. The first thought I had was that it was going to be another mech style novel and a standard plot. However I’ve been underestimating, I really enjoy the quirkinesses and unique writing style the author has along with the unusual situations the protagonist finds themselves in. (Sorry I’m not good at writing reviews I’m just saying how I feel) I’ll be looking forward to the next chapter 🤗

Wow just wow at first i saw the title i think this **** just gonna be same with "online" novel but i wrong wow so glad that im wrong Greatly enjoy the story Nice mc (for me :v ) Plot like it The scene when she/he dont know :v is great im im reading morning 3 :v cant sleep Anyway i enjoy this thank you author Support this bruhhh Btw more please :v

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will you continue this story , i personally think this novel still can be continued and become awesome since it has a good story , though some weird language....

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This is a great read I love it from the beginning to now and am going to continue reading it Love the hole sci-fi Theme and character build Not much bad about it but a Thew grammar mistakes but other then that it is really a GrEat book

I like this story its realy fune and easy to read but... id like to kno will ya continue this story? or u wont return to Tama & Misha duo? i did just finyshed last chapter and starting to mis Mew nom nom 😁

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ho ho!!!! I like this!!! should update more the MC is so hilarious with his/her banana!!! need to read moaaarr chapter!! hahahaha I still laugh at that banana

It's good.

LHO can be split into four quarters and the last quarter again into two. The first three-quarters of the story can be described as nothing but AMAZING...But the last quarter is when things began to go downhill too fast and to a very bad degree. The quality of the story was deplorable...The writing had no grammar mistakes or anything, it was the way the story developed that kinda spoiled the whole thing but still I wouldn't deny the fact that I enjoyed most, if not all of the first three-quarters of the story.......And when I said the last quarter could be separated into two halves...The first half was okayish...bad but okayish. but the second half which constitutes the last 20-30 or more chapters was down-right detestable and made me wish I had never read that part of the story. SPOILER! hap 200+ Momo was THE most annoying character in the whole story. His jokes were bearable at first but then when he took advantage of Misha...I lost it...It was really sad to watch one of my favorite books being brought down to this low but hey it's up to the author to decide what to do with his characters. To all those who want to enjoy a good story, go for the first 200 chapters but after that read it as your own risk of having it leave a bad taste in your mouth and wishing you had stopped reading and never reached the last part.

This is a great novel, and the story is amazing. I just wish that the hiatus will end soon, so that I can keep reading, since the 2 month hiatus without a warning has been quite unfortunate.

If you look past the trap stuff, there's a really solid going on, I really do wish the author would spelling check themselves before publishing. I know its a little thing, but its the little things that count,yes?