Review Detail of Daoisf in Lilim Heritage Online

I've always loved stories that create a new unique world or completely new use of old ideas. This story does that. There are some tropes, but the story refines what makes those tropes used while adding his own unique elements into the story. He makes the characters likeable, I personally really like Dove and Tama, and makes the reader invested in the story. The mix of events with weight and humor within the book really has me waiting for and enjoying each chapter produced. The only complaint I really have is the writing quality. It picks up after the beginning, but there are still some chapters containing grammar mistakes which can be jarring in the middle of the story.