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I am going to be biased not because I know the author or anything. BUT because this a naruto fanfiction with the MC being born in generation before naruto's which has been done but very few and left unfinished unfortunately. Really hope the author sticks with this to the end. Also thanks for telling us about the pairing. Really like mikoto as a pair for the MC, but please don't make this a harem way too many fanfics have been destroyed because of a forced harem. Good harems(realistic) are really hard to write (atleast thats what I have seen). Ps: Author if you are reading this don't be discouraged if someone says bullsh*t just keep calm and keep writing. Thanks for writing this novel and I hope you stick with it to the end. 😁👍

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Tag : tragedy, MC refuse someone who dearly love him and he had interacted with her from the beginning chapter only to pair her with someone else. If only MC didn't refuse Kushina's confession, I won't drop this

Well, it is a biased 5 star for my novel. This is my version of Naruto story which would have changed with the addition of Shun in the Second Shinobi War. I will try to keep the facts and add new things so read it and tell me how you like it...

Reason for the low ratings are as follows. Poor early development. It honestly looks like a cut and paste from the original. Which wouldn't be back if it had any of the foretelling of a fanfic. The beginning chapters were bare and boring. You don't even get a reason for most of what's happening and the main character seems to accept whats happening very easily. Overall story design and character developement just seem shabby at best. Thanks for the read though.

The truth is the novel is good but it seems that the author is already dead.., thats why we dont get an update... sjjduxhsjkaoajxnxkkaowod kdjxuahahjfkdbabs

Honestly for me this is the best Naruto fan fiction , I find the story interesting and can’t wait for the future updates. I hope the author won’t drop this. ( Yes I love Uchiha and sharingan )

See man story is good but summary you gave is flawed like being a UCHIHA is being a nobody I know their kekei genkai was rare even in their clan but still being member of one THE strongest clans to exist and having potential to be the Strongest *sigh*

Best Naruto Fanfiction which starts before Canon, reason for why its only that is because mine is better :V Joke, this is a very good novel, I hope we can have more chapters of it!

Just because this is a naruto fanfiction without a strangely op naruto or **** like that, it needs 5 stars, the character is done greatly, it isn't a reincarnation so the mc doesn't really know about what will happen in future, the stability of updates are great, the story is going good, and the writing is perfect, i hope that you don't change the details about the methods to obtain the mangekyou and maybe eternal mangekyou, if possible i would feel emotions about the things that should be sad.

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Love the story can’t wait for more💖.

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A pretty good OC fic. It has the perfect pacing for events and characterization is done well. The negatives would be how the MC tries to under mind Danzo and his relationship with two girls.

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Great fanfic here! The drama has been strong since the beginning, although the author is sometimes too straight forward about dealing with it. This is one of fanfics I've read that has such a great story development. I trully see the MC of this work being the hero of the story, and not just an addition to the original canon like what we usually see. He is trully embedded to the story. I wish the author can really exolore the personal dillema the MC is going thru. I know I maybe nitpicking here, but, I am truly interested here, and I dont say that for mosr fanfic here in Webnovel. 😁😁😁😁

The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapter is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works and don’t drop or reboot it because I like to read your novel. Even though I spent a stone spirit I still hope you carry on your novel. I hope can read a new chapter soon possible because I can’t wait anymore after many and many months.

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Pretty solid read..................…….....................................................................................................................

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