Reviews of Journey of my Path[Moved]

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He is stronger than azazel by large margin but he's willing to be ordered around by azazel doing stupid stuffs and he even said to yasaka "I'm ordered by governor azazel" "I'm representative of azazel" just stop this stupid sh*t.

love the start just make him the strongest and get him to slap face everyone and collect girls like pokemon. Why the hell would he train him when he has all their skillset,experience and a suitable body to fight? Plus the guy is handsome —> HAREM ROUTE

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I'm only here to say one thing: I don't care about this fanfic at all, all I'm here is to support the author and say that he should focus more on his Naruto and Atg fanfic. reasons: 1. All three of authors fanfics are all Naruto related meaning he knows his naruto. He could finish his Naruto fanfic quicker. 2. Author said he doesn't really know the plot of dxd apart from the animes. Meaning he woukd get stuck writing since he doesn't know the story. 3. Why are u still reading u already know I want more of the Naruto and Atg fics.

Sometimes i think how a retard can even write so much bullshit, i know the you are not the most intelligent ones of our race, but come on this is basic.

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I think you should continue the fic and you should probably give mc a bigger 🧠/iq.now in the name of eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeexxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp I shall spam exp oops I aready did.

could have been good honestly, i find this kind of story where mc should not hide their true power but nah mc goes "lets hide it"or smthing could have been grate but not my slice of pie

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Make this a small Harem ..... and focus on the story ..... please don't drop this fanfic ..... I support you..... Make this a small Harem ..... and focus on the story ..... please don't drop this fanfic ..... I support you.....

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i'd thought your mc will different like from other fan-fict dxd...im dissapointed...im still dont get it why most fan-fict dxd always steal fate protagonist dxd? i mean yes he pervert so what? as if you are saint

The fic is hard to read.... I mean as the i feel like mc is a hired goon as the story progress.... And character set up in the beginning feels like the author only watched 2 anime... I get is op with kamui but come on there is other options to choose from... At the same time mc is working for azazel like a hired goon it feels like he doesnt even have his own chooses in his life....

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- Acts like a 8th grader himself and acts 'cool' -Becomes a lapdog to Fallen Angels -Grammar is terrible - Chooses Demon Slayer template in DXD. DXD power level is way higher than Demon Slayer. And he did this because it's 'cool'. I want to kick the MC in his nuts.

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