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Xmpr30

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2023-07-02 JoinedGlobal
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  • Xmpr30
    Xmpr301mth
    Posted

    It's okay, but very boring. Alot of it, seems like a cultivation novel. And the problem with cultivation novels is that it's too technical, and feels like you are reading a textbook, which makes you sleepy. Also the MC has a really conservative attitude- rude to people for no reason, close minded etc. which ticks me of. If you want something with good grammar, and like cultivation novels this is for you.

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    The Knight of Ruin(DxD)
    Anime & Comics ¡ A_Real_Werewolf234
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  • Xmpr30
    Xmpr302mth
    Posted

    Not bad, but kind of boring. The childhood arc is too long, with no serious training, just him fooling around with girls. The romance is just okay, with the normal tsundere cliche. If you want a romance slice of life fic to pass time, you have come to the right place.

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    Rise of the Immortal Black Dragon King
    Anime & Comics ¡ Sol_Pendragon
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  • Xmpr30
    Xmpr302mth
    Commented

    Can we get out of YGGDRASIL? All this game info is boring af

    Ch 21 Chapter 21: World Champion V
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    Overlord: Ancient one
    Anime & Comics ¡ Clockwork_055
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  • Xmpr30
    Xmpr302mth
    Posted

    This is like a thrasher version of the LN, with a system, and characters that don't match the show. (Esp Sona, she's supposed to be WAY more reserved). Nothing new, except skills from other animes. Save yourself the time and skip this.

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    Issei's Redemption
    Anime & Comics ¡ some_writer
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  • Xmpr30
    Xmpr302mth
    Posted

    Literally a recap of the LN, but with Shadow Monarch powers and the mana core from TBATE. Don't waste your time with this. Might as well just read the original.

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    The Eminence of a True Monarch of the Shadows
    Anime & Comics ¡ Shadow_D_Monarch3
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  • Xmpr30
    Xmpr303mth
    Posted

    This novel is so confusing, I don't even know where to start. The beginning of the novel is terrible and throws you into the story with absolutely no context. Reincarnators? Panda country? Some sort of livestream? Soldiers? You have no fucking idea what's going on. Then the next fucky thing, is the people in the livestream are fucking annoying and their useless comments take up 60% of the chapter only to contribute very little to the plot. The style of the novel gives me third rate Chinese webnovel vibes. This is why anime is more successful than cheap Chinese shit.

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    One Piece World-Only I Know The PLOT!
    Anime & Comics ¡ Novelette_Seeker
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  • Xmpr30
    Xmpr304mth
    Commented

    This arc is too long

    Ch 271 271. The Kids Again
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    Transcended as Lord Buggy
    Anime & Comics ¡ Capt_mermain1
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  • Xmpr30
    Xmpr304mth
    Commented

    Should have choose Pichu. The rest are pretty easy to find, but Pichu aren't plus Raichu is OP. Using a lightning attack, he can then easily get a Pidgey in Route 1.

    Ch 2 I choose you
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    Pokemon : Aura of Darkness
    Anime & Comics ¡ Immortle_diablo123
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  • Xmpr30
    Xmpr304mth
    Posted

    The idea has alot of potential is really interesting but the writing quality just ruins it. The story is a solid 4 but the grammar and terrible readability bring it down to a 3. I tried reading it while ignoring the grammar, but it always ruins the authenticity of the plot. Can you imagine Icebergs secretary saying: "Then also, I got a phone call from the Navy Side" 'Then also'? Navy Side? It's a mid 20s women talking, not a a 6 year old. If you want it increase your rating, please just improve the grammar! Use something like G Docs and read over your work before posting.

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    One Piece : Kingdom Building System
    Anime & Comics ¡ Arsone
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  • Xmpr30
    Xmpr305mth
    Posted

    - Acts like a 8th grader himself and acts 'cool' -Becomes a lapdog to Fallen Angels -Grammar is terrible - Chooses Demon Slayer template in DXD. DXD power level is way higher than Demon Slayer. And he did this because it's 'cool'. I want to kick the MC in his nuts.

    altalt
    Journey of my Path[Moved]
    Anime & Comics ¡ UchihaFanatic
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  • Xmpr30
    Xmpr305mth
    Commented

    genderbend = drop

    Ch 4 4- System
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    One Piece: The Ship of Lust
    Anime & Comics ¡ muhned
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  • Xmpr30
    Xmpr305mth
    Posted

    The writing quality is amazing, but the MC gives of this arrogant vibe and is annoying (esp the 'chuckle' in the middle of the sentences). Addressing Rias as 'duchess' at Kuoh Academy and acting the whole noblesse thing was kinda cringe. The MC is also a showoff that flexes his wealth at every opportunity he gets- even if it doesn't give him any advantage to do so. I don't know if the author will delete this, but if you don't mind the whole showy noble guy act I think this story is a solid 4/5. Personally guys who act like a spoilt noble rich kid flexing their shit 24/7 annoy me and hence it's a 3 from me. PS: That smirk in the thumbnail is punchable.

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    Arthur Liones in Highschool Dxd!
    Anime & Comics ¡ lazybod
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  • Xmpr30
    Xmpr306mth
    Commented

    The grammar is making me 🤮

    Ch 6 One Piece..It is. (Edited)
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    Omniverse Mayhem
    Anime & Comics ¡ IWhoMustNotBeName
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  • Xmpr30
    Xmpr306mth
    Commented

    The fight was too long ngl

    Ch 64 64. Hasshoken
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    Transcended as Lord Buggy
    Anime & Comics ¡ Capt_mermain1
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  • Xmpr30
    Xmpr306mth
    Posted

    This is a really good fic, and has everything I have been looking for. A vanilla gamer story is better than any of the 'unique' crazy ones out there. You have my power stones.

    This book has been deleted.
  • Xmpr30
    Xmpr306mth
    Replied to Nyarlathotep00

    Ignore him/her, it's actually really interesting and logically flows well.

    Ch 1 Prologue
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    Highschool DxD: A new opportunity
    Anime & Comics ¡ Nyarlathotep00
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  • Xmpr30
    Xmpr306mth
    Posted

    The story is just pure entertainment. Just ignore the negative reviews and read it without any expectations. You will have a good time. PS: That thumbnail is the best

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    Riser Phenex isn't a villain
    Anime & Comics ¡ akikan40
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  • Xmpr30
    Xmpr306mth
    Commented

    Man just skipped the chess game

    Ch 21 Future wife
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    Riser Phenex isn't a villain
    Anime & Comics ¡ akikan40
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  • Xmpr30
    Xmpr307mth
    Commented

    Please don't make the system in the harem

    Ch 7 Is The Spirit Of The System A Tsundere?
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    In The Multiverse With Two Golden Fingers! (Don't Read)
    Anime & Comics ¡ BlackStar_BH
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  • Xmpr30
    Xmpr307mth
    Posted

    Let me start out by saying the grammar is absolutely terrible.But excluding that, it's actually a pretty mid read. Excluding grammar, it's not the best or the worst. It's something you would read if you can't find anything else to read. The characters have a little bit of humor in them, but have the same generic trope to their personality. Eg: Mikan the cook, has the same bossy selfish personality as Nami The world building is okay, and mostly derived from the original anime.

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    Transcended as Lord Buggy
    Anime & Comics ¡ Capt_mermain1
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