Review Detail of CopperHeart in Journey of my Path[Moved]

The fic is hard to read.... I mean as the i feel like mc is a hired goon as the story progress.... And character set up in the beginning feels like the author only watched 2 anime... I get is op with kamui but come on there is other options to choose from... At the same time mc is working for azazel like a hired goon it feels like he doesnt even have his own chooses in his life....