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This novel is really cool. I like the development and the flow of your plot. You make it easy for the reader to understand your world and that's something amazing. The character design is fantastic and the writing quality is truly well done. Author, I will follow your story, it really got me hooked. Keep up the good work!
Amazing story! There's literally nothing to complain about this book, everything just sits perfectly! The plot is very interesting, and also written beautifully. The author has the ability to intrigue the readers with his/her writings. I really like this one! I'm sorry for the late review, but I'm glad to be here! Keep on writing, author! I will be cheering for you.
The start of the story was something totally different and I loved it. I don't usually read fantasy stories but this one is good. Like real good. I've only read a couple of chapters and I'm already having a hard time trying to stop myself from reading all of it. The character and world design are unique. I can't wait for how all of this will unfold. Thank you so much for working hard!
I love this kind of book! The genre is definitely one of my favorites and the author is doing right by it. I am only at chapter 16 (and I'll surely continue reading)but the story really hooked me from the beginning. Aside from a few edits here and there, the author really knows how to write! Well done, author!
I really like this story. The beginning immediately had me hooked. The characters are really interesting and the world is filled with mystery, at least for me. The only problem I have is the way how some sentences are phrased. I was confused at times, but I still enjoyed the story. Keep up thy holy work!
I don't really know what to say. The way you put everything is just what I like in a story like this. The back story of the main equipment of the mc, mc being someone who is despiced by others, and giving your readers as much knowledge that they can think of a flow but will not be able to stop reading. I will say you are great at what you do.
The plot is fast, interesting, and the first chapter just charmed me~ There are only minor mistakes in grammar, so I have no complaints. Characters are likable, especially Greg. I just imagine him being an excited puppy when he sees his guardian change forms~ Thanks for the read and keep it up! We want more world-building too!