Review Detail of LuciferVermillion in Journey Of A Legend

Okay... just finish the latest chapter. It's not good. The drum part with the clicking and clapping at the same time totally spoils my imagination. It's like R is trying to beatbox. From the way you write, you really could have a need of punctuation. As well as necessary research. Sorry it might seem harsh, but this is a sincere review based on my personal taste.