LuciferVermillion
The author of The Impossible Fate That Leads To A God Of A New World. Also an engineer in reality where no one knows that I write. Have been trying to progress as many chapters as possible.
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Still, big brother Bin is still better than Bin Ge, in my opinion...
Hmm... I totally did not see that. Hahaha
Very cringy, if you ask me.
So 哥, or Ge, actually means 'brother' in chinese. The worst part is, 哥, or Gē, had a second pronunciation. Other characters that sounds like this is either 歌 (song), 胳 (armpit), or 戈 (surname), where none of it sounds like a name. So as a person who knew chinese, it sounds like it's always saying 'brother'.
Erm, it's not actually about 'Bin' but it's the 'Ge' actually. If you want to write chinese names, better research what that actually means first.
What are you trying to bring out here?
And here's Ling again?
Ok, here's Ling.
I don't get what is 'his head low'. And is he feeling exhausted?
On Chapter 2, suddenly, a person called Leon showed up. Who is Leon? That guy from Resident Evil 4? How does he looks like?
I don't get what is almost touching the skies. What are you intending to tell here? Just how tall is the mountain? Did it touched the clouds already? What is the structure of the building? Castle? Skyscraper? Mansion? Tower? Is the building tall? Or was it just built on a mountain? Rephrase this.
as someone barehanded.
Rewrite this.
This sorry...?
Rewrite this.
Bin Ge? As in? 斌哥?
The bus conductor yelled at the boy who dozed off.