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I HIGHLY RECOMMEND THIS NOVEL TO ALL OF YOU. I am jealous of you. You write so well. You write wayyyy better than me. There wasn't any long and boring info dumps unlike my novel. The MC seems genuine and well written. Still, you can never become too good. So will give you some tips to help you : 1. Read top novels in WebNovel (top 5) 2. Read real best selling novels like Sherlock Holmes and Harry Potter. (You can find their EPUB version online for free.) 3. Watch videos about how to show not tell. (You are already good at it still it will help you.) 4. Ask the top authors about some tips too. 5. Ask urself why isn't my novel getting the popularity I want. (Popularity as in comments, reviews, votes etc.) 6. Write, just write. Simple. Write to ur fullest. Wrong, bad, poor, unreasonable still just write. Trial and error is the best way to learn. No one is judging you. Heck no one even knows ur real name. So, just write. And when u wrote a million words u will see that u have come a long way. Just imagine this. U will get goosebumps right? 7. Believe in urself. 8. Live ur work if u don't, then no one will. 9. I don't have anymore tips as I am also a newbie. Life isn't easy. Just keep pushing and u will win. Ur novel is good and good things can't remain unhidden. I believe in you. U can do it. And even if ur novel didn't do well u can always write another. U r not Shakespeare, right! No one even knows ur name. So, just believe in ur self and push through. I HIGHLY RECOMMEND THIS NOVEL TO ALL OF YOU.
Not a bad read for awhile but gets boring with all the extra extra detail the author adds. like you don't really need to spend 2 chapters on describing a single small event. I stopped around 200 ish because I felt that I'm just blowing coin to read monotonous words. events that could be described in 2 sentences take 2 chapters ect.
Wholesome slice of life type isekai but too much wholesome and emotional. I mean it got boring and since MC with parents in forest for so long with no outside contact it got boring. Also so much repetition of info dumps about how magic works, mana, skills, etc. It just repeated it so many times that it would be better to explain it all at once. Also I honestly like wholesome family moments but after so many chapters of cute moments over and over with not much progress got bored. I mean if you in the edge and only interacting with mom and dad, just training kind of gets boring
I am reading this because it's giving me TBATE vibes but, oh boy. Too much filler informations which are not that necessary, unimportant side stories, and confusing first person perspectives (you should put which person's view if you want to change frequently). And over controlling mother is very annoying. She thought she could control everyone because she got beta male as a husband.
Drawn in by the synopsis and background I started reading this novel expecting cliche romance action and typical things and that's what I got but the thing is the pacing is terrible there was a series of chapters that were supposed to portray 1-2 days ended up being 40-50 chapters filled with descriptions and unneeded info also here to complain about the rate of growth for the cousins and the overall absurdness that the best-predicted mage and the best-predicted knight/ swordsman along with the mc and they can somehow match the rate of growth(stat wise) as a kid who was thrown in a forbidden jungle with literal divine creatures were lurking in and being trained by that same divine creature and the mc falls in love with a 120 yr old btw dropped at chap 220 was a good run but the story is far to slowed pace for me to not get bored (school arc starts around chap 500 btwβ οΈ)
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"Isekai Journey of the Magic Archer" is an exciting and captivating novel that takes you on a thrilling journey through a unique world of magic and adventure. The author, does an excellent job of creating a fascinating storyline that keeps you engaged from start to finish. The protagonist's journey of reincarnation and subsequent separation from his loving family is a heart-wrenching and emotional rollercoaster that draws you in and keeps you invested. The combination of archery and magic, along with the intricate world-building, makes for an enjoyable and immersive reading experience. Overall, "Isekai Journey of the Magic Archer" is a must-read for any fan of fantasy and adventure novels.
Im only at chpt 30+, i keep seeing flashback scenes of mcβs parents relationship. Iβm doubting if the tag βro-manceβ actually meant for MCβs or MCβs parents..hopefully its the MCβs. Writing about parentsβ flashback scenes about their relationship seems ok to me but kinda want to skimp about those info. Not really interested with that kind of fatherβs character. Too soft like a rabbit π΅βπ«. Author, pls clear this doubt for your reader. Thank you