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  • Anonn
    Anonn1yr
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    The Concept is good, nothing extraordinary but quite enjoyable. The characters are, although tolerable, quite cringy. It especially irks me that the MC immediately loved his parents after being reincarnated lol. Lastly, the writing quality of this novel, specifically the grammar and sentence structure, is horrendous. Due to this, I often break my immersion in the story to decipher what the author is talking about. Overall, the quality of this novel is hovering over mediocrity. However, I believe that editing and a bit of improvement on the character writing can bring this novel to a solid 4/5.

    Isekai Journey Of The Magic Archer
    Fantasy · H2Oz_Anxious
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    Anonn2yr
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    This is a sign of a bad/mediocre author - a very confusing introduction. The first few chapters are meant to hook readers not to confuse them.

    Ch 3 New Life, World and Mysterious Voice
    The Demon Monarch System
    Fantasy · Syphiinz
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