Reviews of Is that a Wisp?
Is that a Wisp?
Suiyan
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If I must say something about this story it is a amazingly good story to read about. While I was reading this fiction it just sucked me in the storyline and loved it a lot. Even when I must wait for the chapters to come out it doesn't lessens my intrest in this fiction. Suiyen who has written this fiction if you read this review I want to thank you for this amazing story and please keep writing this story and don't listen to hate comments if there would be any on this amazing story but if you will continu this story I will be one of the many loyal readers and lovers of this story. And something else don't chance how krune is he is good as he is and keep some chapters for him and his EQ I love those alot.
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It's bad and I reaaly think it's really dumb think to forgive every human that KILLING/DESTROYING YOUR RACE FOR MONEY. But I guess you are not willing to kill them, might as well forgive them so they kill more of your race for money. And I see some review saying "omg finally a mc that won't kill without a reason". like bruh..
Unable to read. At some point, I couldn't bother with the poor writing quality. No editor... and probably not even Grammarly. I got through a few dozen chapters, but when the story started to slip, I couldn't bear through the pain. I did not like how all of a sudden, the character seemed to be the great son of heaven.
A very original concept. Good writing besides a few typos here and there. Story telling is clear. Character designs are clear. Mc is actually a galaxy brain. Only part i would say needs improvement is the constant spoiling in your own paragraphs. Like. "What he had accomplished was absolutely insane if anyone heard about it. But our wisp doesn't know that." or "[insert name] is super rare and amazing but our wisp doesn't know that" It's a minor annoyance and they're not really spoilers. But what it certainly could be counted as is bad writing. We should find out about these things at the same time as our wisp. Not suddenly throw a paragraph at us that explains it. Even though we shouldn't technically know it yet. Luckily it does seem this has become more rare the further you go, so as i said. A minor annoyance.
Soo here we go guys :) Just for info, I'm around chapter 600 and *might* have binge read all these chapters in jist about a week and a half. That's to say, this wisp can get VERY addictive. This is the story of a wisp, the weakest being in the universe, which with a tinh bit of luck and mostly his own wits and perseverance manages to become stronger. The MC here is absolutely amazing. Like any other MC, of course he is going to be much stronger than he should be at his level. But he is mostly hilarious, lacks any common sense/ doesn't realise how other people will feel when he either is too good or says things without any filter π€£. He is the type of character you can get attached to so easily: he easily converts people to his Krune ways od life, he is heartwarming, loves simple things like cooking in a world too way too focused on strength and being the best. While he IS the best for sure, that's not his aim at all. He'd rather be low-key, but FAILS miserably at it π€£. While the plot advances, more and more horizons are opened, so the story definitely doesn't stagnate at all and keeps on surprising me π. All the characters that appear are so easy to get attached too and like Krune, they all have their strength and little twirks that are essential for character design and story development and make the overall thing hilarious and entertaining. One more thing, for once I'm so glad that all characters are fully developed, including female ones. I've read way too many stories where female characters are either pretty, petty or blocks of ice to be carried around. For all of the ones that ask in comments, like Suiyan said, there is NO HAREM (I'm so happy about it). While there is a romantic interest, it barely qualifies as having romance at all. First, the MC barely understands human emotions, so he's not gonna make a fuss about it. Second, it's a useful repellent against useless romantic plot detours, so there's no risk of it happening here! Let's just call the girld an extra important and reliable team member. In the end, it just shows again how much of a loyal wisp the MC is π. Thanks for reading this review! I hope it helps, and I definitely recommend reading the series! π
This book was a big surprise for me. The world development includes multiple universes and we learn about it as the mc does. And the story follows a wisp (obviously). But as he quickly grows stronger and learns about his surroundings we see this personality that is more kind than usually found in a book about cultivation. And this genus will have you laughing as he tries to avoid standing out.
Iβm reviewing this story as of chapter 368. I binged through all 368 chapters of this story in about 4 days and I can say that the premise of the story is very unique. The main character is the weakest race: a wisp, and cultivates to become the strongest. If that was all there was to it, it wouldnt be any different from other standard wuxia novels. However, the author focuses on having the main character have a more multi faceted identity that goes beyond the harem building, super genius, I will kill you for slighting me personality that many wuxia novels share. The character development is nothing amazing, but it is far better than many other novels of its genre. Overall, the story, pacing, and world is really where this novel shines. It is just as engaging in these aspects as some of the all time classic novels of its genre like coiling dragon. Other than passable character development the only other drawback of this novel is the mediocre grammar and writing style of the author. Itβs clear that English is not the authors first language and the story is riddled with at least 10-15 spelling and grammar errors per chapter. Itβs definitely passable enough to convey the authors meaning, but it does get in the way of enjoying the novel. 4.3 out of 5 stars.
All in all, I really can't complain about anything. The story is frash, the pacing is really good, and while I don't always agree with how things happening (ahm ahm the way feifei and krune got together) you've obviously thought about it all and you care about the story and it's quality, and that alone is significantly more than what many authors, especially of the webnovel variety, care to bother with. Keep the good work comming!
