Review Detail of Gruuno in Is that a Wisp?

A very original concept. Good writing besides a few typos here and there. Story telling is clear. Character designs are clear. Mc is actually a galaxy brain. Only part i would say needs improvement is the constant spoiling in your own paragraphs. Like. "What he had accomplished was absolutely insane if anyone heard about it. But our wisp doesn't know that." or "[insert name] is super rare and amazing but our wisp doesn't know that" It's a minor annoyance and they're not really spoilers. But what it certainly could be counted as is bad writing. We should find out about these things at the same time as our wisp. Not suddenly throw a paragraph at us that explains it. Even though we shouldn't technically know it yet. Luckily it does seem this has become more rare the further you go, so as i said. A minor annoyance.