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Multiverse Gacha

Author: XElenea
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Read ‘Multiverse Gacha’ Online for Free, written by the author XElenea, This book is a Anime & Comics Fanfic, covering ACTION Fanfiction, ROMANCE Fan Fiction, ADVENTURE Fanfiction Net, and the synopsis is: Is It Wrong to Try to Pick Up Girls in a Dungeon with Gate of Babylon?[DxD - Now!]...Waking up in a mysterious world, Au...

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Is It Wrong to Try to Pick Up Girls in a Dungeon with Gate of Babylon? [DxD - Now!] ... Waking up in a mysterious world, August finds himself grappling with the dilemma of whether he can survive in a seemingly beautiful yet deeply dark world. Fortunately, leveraging the luck of his nine generations, he manages to obtain the Gate of Babylon belonging to a certain goldenman... With the Gate of Babylon in his pocket, August decides to amass all the treasures available in the world. However, once again, he faces a dilemma... Are girls also treasures? Can he keep them in his Gate of Babylon?

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XElenea
XEleneaAuthorXElenea

This review is solely intended to inform you, the current readers, and potentially those who intend to read, that this Fan-fiction is a translated version of the original and contains my personal edits. My purpose in translating this fan-fiction personally is purely out of hobby, and as I am quite interested in this fan-fiction. And as you may know, fan-fiction of this nature usually contains some rather unpleasant elements, and as I have been reading it up to now, there is quite a bit of poison and the author's personal bias embedded within. However, don't worry, I will sacrifice and act as the poison tester for all of you and make edits to remove the poison present in the original version of the fan-fiction. So, you can rest assured if you are hesitant to read this type of fan-fiction due to concerns about poison. I will provide an edited version that is poison-free and devoid of the author's personal bias. That's all, and thank you.

Mystero
MysteroLv12Mystero

This is a translation, what it means is that while translator did a good job, the novel it self is about a chinese protagonist in a japanese setting. Need to say more?

Kiradeux
KiradeuxLv13Kiradeux

Good translation, but the source material has issues. Realistically, this should be called "Is it wrong to have Zero Creativity with Gate of Babylon in a dungeon?" because all the MC does is copy Gil and waste money. The irony about GoB is that it could kill most level 1 monsters with stones found in a field or firing a single Valis - but the MC never actually tries anything except copying Gil and being broke. Outside Context Powers on an OC or SI are fun, but if they're just going to mindlessly use them the exact same way as the original character and fail to progress, then the MC loses all identity and just sublimates under the original characters personality. The MC is completely bleh.

AkashicLibrary
AkashicLibraryLv1AkashicLibrary

Pretty much average overall. Not much to the story. An average writing quality. Average idiot mc that wants a harem and talks about how he wants a harem. The story quality isnt the. Best but its somewhat readable. The way author writes some parts sound monotone and emotionless.

Darte
DarteLv10Darte

Actually, in the beginning, it's quite good, but the MC's personality seems like that of a 3-year-old throwing a tantrum. Initially, the Chinese style isn't unbearable, but after approximately 50 chapters, it becomes intolerable. I know it's a translation, but it's just a waste of time. The most pathetic part is the MC saying that those who use power to force a woman are scum, yet he has this power and uses it passively on EVERYONE.

NEET_Vermin
NEET_VerminLv3NEET_Vermin

- This Novel has a "Gacha-type System" as the main power, with which you gain skills, magic or consumables. This seemed completely unnecessary and redundant to me, knowing that in that world there already exists a similar concept with the Falna, a Divine Blessing that gives skills and Status, and the Excelia, the Experience gained by defeating Monsters and allows you to level up. · Writing Quality: First of all, it is a Chinese novel translated with MTL (Machine Translation) and without much, if not any, editing. With that said, you already know that topics and cliches will enter into these types of stories. The grammar is very basic, but it is understandable. · Stability of Updates: 1 daily chapter with 93 chapters released to date. There is not much to say about this, it is perfect but they are not very long since I read more or less 20 chapters in less than 1 hour. · Story Development: At the moment and in the 40th that I have read there is hardly any change from the original Canon; The MC (Main Character) levels up in the Dungeon, meets the same characters from the original, joins a Family and this last one was quite forced... The plot moves very slowly and if it changes in the future I will modify this part. · Character Design: The MC is the archetype of the Chinese protagonist. A reincarnated character who already knows about the events of Danmachi. He has a Gacha-type "System" as his main power, with which he gains skills, magic or consumables. He is arrogant but without reaching the point of vanity, is shameless who gropes the breasts of a girl who is helping him because he is injured, when he kills monsters becomes a psychopath for no apparent reason... Comparing him to Gilgamesh is like comparing a sand castle to Mount Tai. · World Background: Only Orario. From what I have read, the protagonist started in the iconic city of the original and there has not been any mention or development other than Orario or the Dungeon. It becomes repetitive.

Nutcruncher_442
Nutcruncher_442Lv14Nutcruncher_442

Hi just a reader here personally love the fact your translating this but it's a bad story. Like you said in your review a lot of bias and poison. Story concept amazing could have a system tied to just giving him stuff from the Gate of Babylon instead of gatcha or a gatcha for the tresures inside of it from the original GoB. dont think I'm personally going to continue reading after your review 1 or 2 lovers cool but the mc just seems childish with the pokemon style harem it seems to be going towards. Thanks for your hard work tho I recommend you do write your own version of this and credit the translated version.

SAURON_
SAURON_Lv2SAURON_

Honestly would be good if there was less loop holes also your story doesn't flow it flows at one point then just stops being good the next or a character does something out of their personality

Trouxa_157
Trouxa_157Lv3Trouxa_157

Thanks for the interesting story! I'm giving it five stars because I'm biased, as Gilgamesh is one of my favorite characters and I really like the Loki family too! May every day be mass chapter release day! Amen!

Holop0k
Holop0kLv4Holop0k

its gg. i feel like i lost around 40 iq after 3 chapters. now i have only 120 iq .would i like this fanfic now?))?)?)))

DiabloRedfox
DiabloRedfoxLv13DiabloRedfox

overall just cringe and most of the stuff is forced, i don't know how people give this 5 star reviews, except for update stability everything would've been 0 star if I could give that

Daoschemer
DaoschemerLv1Daoschemer

Bashing Issei is not enough, and taking his Boosted Gear like countless other fanfics is overused and unoriginal. Turning Ddraig into a woman as well shows a lack of creativity and individuality. You should at least TRY to be original and imaginative!

Casual_Vanze
Casual_VanzeLv6Casual_Vanze

Just because you admit that it's plagiarized doesn't make it alright. Also too much exclamation mark (!).

Luohuo
LuohuoLv14Luohuo

this review is strictly based off the danmachi arc before mc used his world travel card and went to dxd verse. overall it was a good read. Mc is quite self centered and encapsulate his existence as the successor of gilgamesh. he is also the embodiment of Lust itself. Mc doesn't hesitate to grow his harem and is very honest as well. he grows stronger as he absorb desire of lust from his surrounding. he has also fkd freya too but he makes it clear that she would just be a casual segs friend type of thing rather then her joining the harem. freya here is pretty much depicted as a pretty high order hoe so if you like freya just beware. Mc got ais and tsubaki in the harem and also has fkd them too. Bell in the story is actually a female and Mc is protecting her a little till she becomes a hero. I think bell's LF is actually targeting Mc for her heroic growth here so she should still have the fast growth Bell canonical had. the Mc here is already stronger then Otter and is a Level 6. tbh Mc here is super OP and expect the power scaling to go wild. I just feel disappointed how many op skills Mc got in danmachi world and pretty much make the entire world a joke. for context he got so many bleach and seven deadly sins and the chess piece of dxd skills and bro even has weapons loke the signature weapon of kirito in sao then bleach weapons and even muramasa tho idk if that one is from fgo or other verse that it's not even funny. and the world is only danmachi at that time. it's a CN fanfic so expect the obvious. I think at this point imma take my leave from this one since I only started this one for danmachi verse and there isn't all that much for me to look forward to at this point.

MapleHinataSyrup
MapleHinataSyrupLv1MapleHinataSyrup

You made me get excited after reading this, I hope that this continues since I ran out of things to read that interest me so pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ngl I'm starting to feel dumb now should I start writing myself?

Aces_Mark
Aces_MarkLv5Aces_Mark

I know this is a translation but i want to thank you for removing most of the poison that Chinese people put in their novels this is way better.

Braian_Rodriguez
Braian_RodriguezLv1Braian_Rodriguez

Exelente, no hay necesidad de más palabras, siempre que se ver una reencarnación no princesa con gasté of Babylon en orario, está serie está justo en el blanco, más tarde sabré si la historia es buena o mala, solo la idea ya me encanta.

AspiringPedo
AspiringPedoLv4AspiringPedo

Yes.

Good_Deus
Good_DeusLv1Good_Deus

Muito falta algumas coisas mais já que é só uma tradução, então bom trabalho para a pessoa que está traduzindo. Aaaaaksksksksksksjgdhdjdowna xjek ejsksbeiwjwoabsvsjskwkskjw

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ElemiseLv1Elemise

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