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Is it wrong to take a break in Danmachi?

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What is Is it wrong to take a break in Danmachi?

Read Is it wrong to take a break in Danmachi? fanfiction written by the author TheMetaCheese on WebNovel, This serial novel genre is Anime & Comics fanfic stories, covering romance, adventure, anime, danmachi. ✓ Newest updated ✓ All rights reserved

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Alvar has finished his goal by protecting his world from its evil and succeeded in building a kingdom to help the races live in harmony. Still, after living for so long and working on his kingdom he wished to retire, so he picked his most trusted friends and taught them how to lead the kingdom and look after it in his stead. Afterward, Alvar with the help of his magic, items and elementals traveled to a different world to rest and complete his promise. =============================================== A/N This is the first time I wrote a ff so any suggestions and criticism are welcome so that I can improve. Also, I don't own anything but my OCs and I am mainly using Danmatchi as a template so I might change things like some monsters or characters and so on. English isn't my first language so do correct some of the mistakes I make!

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Yellow_Duck_Toy
Yellow_Duck_ToyLv1Yellow_Duck_Toy

nice story, can't wait for more! :) (For the 50 words minimum):ddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd

Bound_by_gacha
Bound_by_gachaLv4Bound_by_gacha

I see potential in this fanfic and so far I like it and I hope you can continue your best in this fanfic and don’ t just suddenly discontinue it like many other good fanfic I read

W4ND3R1N6_R34D3R
W4ND3R1N6_R34D3RLv4W4ND3R1N6_R34D3R

Nice Novel, there's some potential to improve the story telling and nice introduction to the story (i will throw some random facts, There are 27 emotions: admiration, adoration, aesthetic appreciation, amusement, anger, anxiety, awe, awkwardness, boredom, calmness, confusion, craving, disgust, empathic pain, entrancement, excitement, fear, horror, interest, joy, nostalgia, relief, romance, sadness, satisfaction, sexual desire, surprise.)

SujetoXVII
SujetoXVIILv1SujetoXVII

History implies that the mc is terrarium. This story at the moment is also not bad or good which is my opinion currently. It is a good idea to give him a mc mysteryso you can go well or go very badly as they develop

Reistlan
ReistlanLv3Reistlan

Good story, but many useless information. I wanna see story, not describe of all actions!!! Chapters so small. You write many words, but where's story?? Read 24 chpr in 10 minutes. Don't see point waiting next. Come back in few years, maybe can read ~ hour.

unknownless
unknownlessLv2unknownless

Great fanfic i like it ||₩₩₩|||||||||||₩₩₩₩|||||||||||||||₩₩₩₩₩|||||||||||$///^5^/^/^/^/^/^/^/^/^/&/&/&/&/&/&/&/&/&/&/&/&/&/&/&&/&///////&/&&&///////55/^////7/6$7/^$///^/7///^/^//6//$^/7/6/&/^$*^//^$&/

WeDaRiPoTo
WeDaRiPoToLv1WeDaRiPoTo

Good story and something new for me too. Hopefully more to come. ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

Giruman
GirumanLv4Giruman

it's it's good story and I others enjoy it but the whole hiding identity thing is not my cup of tea gggjdbhebdhjdbsbskskdndnlendbdkssmdbsmsmsnsndkdnrnfbdndndf

3RR0R_404
3RR0R_404Lv43RR0R_404

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Arsene_Holmes
Arsene_HolmesLv1Arsene_Holmes

A good story, I still can't give a high rating, but these first 15 chapters were wonderful. I hope the quality continues. Looking forward to more chapters!

Logtagor
LogtagorLv1Logtagor

I’m so tired of this hide and seek, why are the authors trying to make the main character hide, but at the same time deliberately drawing attention to them, it’s annoying because it’s useless, you don’t have to tell everyone that you’re from another world, why not show that you’re a powerful person and join the family of a reliable god, and not hide behind a mask, attracting the attention of all the gods, why even have a mask when no one knows you anyway, it’s simply unbearable

krokrok007
krokrok007Lv4krokrok007

please get back.........................................................

The_man_The_myth
The_man_The_mythLv4The_man_The_myth

Dropped? ??????????????????????????????????

Benghazier
BenghazierLv4Benghazier

Good story like where this is going, it has some flaws but over all 10/10

Pro_pain
Pro_painLv1Pro_pain

Good story so far Ddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd

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