Dream_land
This book starts out in a very dark place. I love the idea behind it and how the author describes the MCs surroundings. It takes the reader right into the scene. My only negative critique is the English which at some parts makes it hard to understand what is happening. To the author: Keep working on it!
First off you do have a good story line with a good set of characters. However, your tense work and your grammar could really use some work. For me it broke the immersion more than once. Maybe use spell check or grammarly. Personally I'm not a fan of text talk like tho. All in all a good book though that I can't wait to read more of.
Okay the way you are the taking the story is really awesome and the way you are still holding daisy life even tho she's in Aurora body is just wowww...and the bloody Daisuke is also hot and I look the way that you gave the background details... Just awesome...I hope you really updated....just love your Book and story ..good one Lucky
Never read a romance never before with a female mc as the main character. This is certainly a refreshing new take. It's entertaining to read, making one roll to the next chapter unconsciously. (at least for me) Some parts have wrong grammar but it's alright to be honest.(everyone's been there) It's a fairly good read. Looking forward to further plot advancements
I only have one word for this novel, one word only. Are you curious about my one word too? Why so curious? Stop reading to find out my one word man. Omg, please stop being so curious. Curiosity will kill the cat, don't you know this. Fine, seeing how you're so desperate to know my one word. It's collection. What's collection? Obviously, it's adding this novel to your library fool.