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notice a word that I havent found on most ln’s i read, and that is ‘sitio’. I first thought that it was another language but then I found ‘Lungsod’ so I’m like “oh a Fil novel” and got excited. I only read a few chaps but its good so far. dont like how naive the mc is though. like how he knows the zombie reacts to noice but still choose a gun as a weapon even though its very loud. he also doesn’t think ahead of different situations, like what if he was cornered by lvl 2 and 3 zombies. he can’t use the gun since the zombies are imune.
I've read upto chapter 118 and I can say that its different from my normal reads, im dropping this novel because I feel that the way the story is developing doesn't feel enjoyable anymore, his distrust in other survivors although makes sense, just seems forced and doesent make to much sense, not only has he not been betrayed by anyone to scar him to the point that upon first meeting, he would instantly distrust someone to the degree he does, the writer also forces a side character he created as a sacrificial lamb to further the point no one can be trusted by making her go back to an enemy that wants her dead just so she can screw the main character that she interacted with for less than a minute and was saved by, just to push his point that survivors can't be trusted. the world building and other aspects of this novel are brilliant but I just feel the novel is going to be that all survivors are greedy and dangerous and that the only things he can trust are the current two and any more pets he might tame I future chapters. other than that the writing quality was great, although I'm not great at English myself (my first and only language) I didnt notice any flaws and it was an enjoyable read, but I cant promise an English major will say the same.
By the time the mc met up with his first ally “sissa” i already gave up trying to read. The whole event was forced and i’m just blown away from how stupid the main character is. Then when he ranked up to 1 he lost most of his brain mass. There is no fix to the story since it’s already done. Since author you like this type of story go for it but since you made it like this don’t expect anyone to cheer you on...
I really want to like it. But it's just boring. I read the comments in the chapters more than I do the book. The beginning is way too slow. Spent like 4 chapters of just pure lore and science talk with the system. I can't get past chapter 11 because it's just too boring, and it doesn't show any hope for the future.
I tried for 20-30 chapters but this isn`t for me. The only dialog is between system and host talks about stuff that will happen and lo and behold some of them do asap, at least for me nothing feels unique. Its just bunch of info dump i get it its just the start but man i recall when i read some of the other novels i couldn`t stop reading every single sentence. And with this i mostly skip coz i actually realized that there is not much to read about. And this weird humor about sticking his finger inside zombie brain being perverted it can work once but when u repeat it , its just weird. Plus most of the comments are about correction of wording or stating the obvious repeat of same statements. Maybe it gets better later on im not sure but if your aim is to get people hocked and pay you for chapters you need a better overall start. Maybe he saves someone so we got some other dialog that is not with system + he talks about government and what other people are doing like you got working tv and network inside apocalypse. He gets latest news from system? i dont get it. Maybe i overread zombie/apocalypse genre and im expecting something better. Tho i hope some of my comments help you see some of the wrongdoings and i hope you corrected them in your next works :) When i got more time ill see to respectfully read more and rate it maybe better/worse we`ll see. Thanks for hard work keep it up but for now 2.5 stars (tho for 10% of reading) but start is important and its start of journey. Best of luck Cho
As the author said, there's a lot of grammatical errors. He seems to have a preference for using philippino terms rather than translating them in. The story is mildly interesting. The author wants perfectionists to begone. I'm not a perfectionist; however my reading habits can make me say a few unsavory words here and there even so. For example, I'm not sure whether my boredom was slightly alleviated or if I wasted my time and still wasn't satisfied.
Even though there was a lof of info at the start, I enjoyed reading it after the info dump and it is quite great that you are using Filipino terms in this novel but I suggest that you should have notes on what they mean for other readers that don’t know the Filipino terms like Barangay, Lungsod, and etc. Keep up the good work author, I appreciate this novel.