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the author states about the omnipotence of science but the story has its foundation built on fantasy, system, and martial arts. is this what science is about? the writing style is rather good. the prologue and the plot kinda feel controversial and if someone is ok with it then he should definitely give it a try.
Personally this is a really good story and my reasons on why it's good 1 - The writing quality of this story is really good you could almost feel the emotions if you get into the story 2 - Why it isn't the fastest upload speed the author makes sure that the writing quality is done right for the best experience 3 - The story has a unique storyline that not many if all get used 4 - The character design to me is general although I don't remember the design that much, if i'm wring please ignore this 5 - The story has the mc slowly build up the cities of himself and rimuru's while exploring the world alrhough the mc is mostly inside his lab most of the time 6 - The story gives us the relationship between characters that seem better than my own, the story gives characters "character" and emotions that you won't see in other fanfics To be honest I like a more fantasy "I am going to do something that might kill us but with no accidents" type of story but this is amazing
This is great. The plot is very well thought out and there's no unnecessary expositon. The writing gets to the point so that every sentence that I read feels like it was worth reading. In comparison, chinese webnovels are just loaded with textbook phrases like, "the crowd was [insert dramatic/over the top reaction]," that makes me literally skip tens of chapters at a time (and eventually drop reading it). There are still some glaring prpblems though. For example, there's something of a recurring joke (?) that the protagonist makes by saying that he isekai'd into a Tolkien ripoff, and other things that are completely irrelevant (like theories about the world being a similation and such and such) and/or trying-to-be-funny-but-really-isn't. But all-in-all, this is a really
I like the idea of it being Science-based, though I like my fair share of repetitive fantasy with the same plot, This is actually something new for me. The story seems well thought out, and there is a lot of description to explain what is going on. You can tell this is something the author is passionate about, making it an interesting read for readers as well. Good luck author! keep it up!
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