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This is great. The plot is very well thought out and there's no unnecessary expositon. The writing gets to the point so that every sentence that I read feels like it was worth reading. In comparison, chinese webnovels are just loaded with textbook phrases like, "the crowd was [insert dramatic/over the top reaction]," that makes me literally skip tens of chapters at a time (and eventually drop reading it). There are still some glaring prpblems though. For example, there's something of a recurring joke (?) that the protagonist makes by saying that he isekai'd into a Tolkien ripoff, and other things that are completely irrelevant (like theories about the world being a similation and such and such) and/or trying-to-be-funny-but-really-isn't. But all-in-all, this is a really

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Inspired Inventor (Tensura AU)

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The Tolkien ripoff is a joke since The Lord of the Rings, written by J. R. R. Tolkien, heavily inspired every 'fantasy' novel that came after it. Also, this serves as an exploration into sci fi concepts, and things like the Simulation Theory is part of sci fi, so I felt it necessary to include it.