Sorry to anyone reading this, I had a sudden thought of writing a novel that I forgot that I wasn't that creative and I was less organized with the end result and such. I had also accidentally given the main character, John, way too much power and some of the powers don't make sense.

Thanks

Today, like Feb 2nd today?

That is why he is growing as they progress, learning more about EM and how to properly use it to it's fullest.

Where does someone go to vote?

I would appreciate if you went back to earlier chapters like these and rewrote them with proper grammer, sorry if you ate offended by what I said it's just annoying to read this.

+1

Obviously this is going with Marvel Universe and Peter's looks but has good updating stability and the story is more fast paced from what I am reading. I would recommend the Author to go back and fix the text such as instead of it being [i] it is [I], something small but it annoys me to read

MCU is the Earth-616 but the authors wanted it to be named differently so they went with Earth-199999

Can't really say anything about the world's background as it is based off of Harry Potter and hadn't changed anything about it. One complaint I have to make bloody clear, please fix the fanfic before posting it, it is hard to see what is someone speaking and who is speaking and what someone is doing if you don't properly "" the text.

Most likely as he is going to break the system of freya and loki being the top two families

I would suggest you rewriting privious chapter, making sure to replace the U's with you

Great

Feel like you should add something to differentiate them

That would go against the entire thing about not relying on miracles

Bruh

I caught up and now I am sad

Reading this is so annoying, trying to identify who is speaking and if they are speaking at all.

Hopefully you recover soon!

He stated in a earlier chapter that he was setting up a foundation for future magic. I think he will create his own unique magic in the future, given time and patience.