Yozora_Hikari
3 stars for Writing Quality because improvements are very much needed especially in grammar.3 stars for Story Development because it's too fast paced but not justifying enough. I mean, I'm only at chapter 7 and there already is a lot, A LOT, of interactions between the MCs. Also, the interactions are somewhat forced but I understand where the author is getting at.3 stars for character design because the FMC's character design is somewhat shaky. Since I'm already at chapter 7, her character should've been set in stone by now or at least not as shaky especially since it's her POV since chapter 1. For other characters, I can't really judge because there's not enough materials to judge them yet.Updating Stability, idk so I'll just give 5 stars.World Background is 4 stars because I can picture it from the FMC's description but it's not quite clear yet. I've been thinking of dropping this but I just can't ignore it because I can see the potential of this book going into my top list if a professional editor helped the author. I really hope that it improves as I continue reading this. I will edit this review if I see some improvements.
This was my Limited Free book for the day. The summary and cover made it seem interesting, but I could only handle one chapter. The pacing was a bit rough (going from the library, to hanging with friends, straight back to the library, truck-kun by a lake and immediately with the old couple). There needs to be line breaks or something. A possible editor as well for the grammar and punctuation. The summary was well written so the first chapter threw me for a loop. Characters and the world seemed interesting though. Sorry if this comes off as rude.
Wow 😳 the book is really really good 😊 the story is very captivating. the part with the bewitching spell made ne worried i actually thought the author would maka the female lead be hated by the male leads but it's actually not wich makes me so happy. I honestly don't like too much drama so this book is actually my cup of tea. The only downside is the grammar ..some verbe tenses need to be rechecked and some sentences do t make sense but overall the storyline and the background and characters are all SSS ❤️
The story is very interesting! And our author has written it perfectly! She has described our fl full well. And the world building is just excellent. I can't wait for Anne to journey through the Valorian Kingdom and see what she is really looking for in life. Good job, author! Keep on writing!! ❤️ 😘 ❤️
you are introduced to the world where everything is magical. The FL is a mature 40 something year old woman who is now back in her youthful glory. she is so polite that i was wondering what will happen next if problems ensues (who knows if she will snap in the future. hahaha i cant wait) so it was a good start and looking forward to see the conflict soon 😊😊