Review Detail of MissyLib in In Another World I Become a Healer With Purple Hair

This was my Limited Free book for the day. The summary and cover made it seem interesting, but I could only handle one chapter. The pacing was a bit rough (going from the library, to hanging with friends, straight back to the library, truck-kun by a lake and immediately with the old couple). There needs to be line breaks or something. A possible editor as well for the grammar and punctuation. The summary was well written so the first chapter threw me for a loop. Characters and the world seemed interesting though. Sorry if this comes off as rude.