Review Detail of pressuresore in In Another World I Become a Healer With Purple Hair

3 stars for Writing Quality because improvements are very much needed especially in grammar.3 stars for Story Development because it's too fast paced but not justifying enough. I mean, I'm only at chapter 7 and there already is a lot, A LOT, of interactions between the MCs. Also, the interactions are somewhat forced but I understand where the author is getting at.3 stars for character design because the FMC's character design is somewhat shaky. Since I'm already at chapter 7, her character should've been set in stone by now or at least not as shaky especially since it's her POV since chapter 1. For other characters, I can't really judge because there's not enough materials to judge them yet.Updating Stability, idk so I'll just give 5 stars.World Background is 4 stars because I can picture it from the FMC's description but it's not quite clear yet. I've been thinking of dropping this but I just can't ignore it because I can see the potential of this book going into my top list if a professional editor helped the author. I really hope that it improves as I continue reading this. I will edit this review if I see some improvements.