Pill_Guy
This story is a hidden gem. Would definitely recommend reading. Main character is not stupid, even a bit smart. He is cautious. You can really see the character growth reading through the chapters. The interactions between characters are very lively and fun. The plot progression is logical. There is no really unexpected plot twists, because you can clearly see where all this came from. Even if you did not see it coming, you realise, that it makes sense, in retrospective. If there is a minus, it's that updates are a bit slow. But the story is great, it's understandable. However, you cannot help but want it to be faster.
This is a very good one. Made the account to say this. The grammar is good enough and does not seem truncated like half the "novels" in this website. The worldbuilding is progressing together with the story, there is no info dump, just plot progression with little insertions of background. The characters are interesting, the main character passes off as a guy that is scared of what he is, he seems like a good guy, and hides behind his parasite persona, maybe as a form of a psychological defense mechanism. He says he is a bad guy that is just doing things to survive, but has a kind side that he hides from other people. The story is coming out nicely, waiting for further developments.
It's a pretty good novel, I have to admit. The story development is pretty good, the antagonists are well-thought out, fights are interesting, and the schemes in general are good. The world background is good as well. Many things aren't mentioned until it's relevant, causing the novel's history to be extremely vague. We have yet to know just how much of a difference there is from normal earth and this earth, but whatever. Characters are decent. Nothing much to say here, a problem with mystery novels is that I can't really say too much about plot holes as half of them are resolved later on. Overall, a solid novel. I would recommend this.
This novel is probably the best i have read on this app and ive read over 250 hours on this. the character is well developed the system isnt super cluttered and its got a very good plot. Only thing thats a bit sad is its been a month since he posted more. though he is active on this so its probably just a lack of time. All in all if there continues to be more chapters then 5/5 stars from me.
Aside from the REALLY inaccurate biology, this is a pretty good read. I have a BS in Human Bio, so when I read the biology parts I got extremely frustrated. But once I got into the flow of not taking the biology seriously, it's a pretty nice read to spend your time. The new system of morals in this future is a pretty interesting take, and the mystery/action scenes are well-made and immersive. If you don't have a biology background, I think you will find this a pretty good sci-fi book.
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