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  • Valixiant
    Valixiant1yr
    Replied to FluffiaBeard

    I do not care.

    "Haha, for this mission, I have played for 5 years with barely any rest for this day to come," Jiang Ming laughed loudly as he couldn't wait for the unknown reward that he was about to receive.
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    Game Lord's Cultivation System
    Eastern · Idczhen
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  • Valixiant
    Valixiant1yr
    Replied to Idczhen

    Well, I guess you can't convince idiots using logic I suppose. I hope one day you look back upon your comments and realize how little sense you made.

    "Haha, for this mission, I have played for 5 years with barely any rest for this day to come," Jiang Ming laughed loudly as he couldn't wait for the unknown reward that he was about to receive.
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    Game Lord's Cultivation System
    Eastern · Idczhen
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  • Valixiant
    Valixiant1yr
    Replied to man_of_culture3030

    The most amusing thing about this is that you will probably never realize the irony in what you just posted.

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    Regressed Reincarnation: How to Escape a Fantasy World!!
    Fantasy · Ethel_Imaginations
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  • Valixiant
    Valixiant1yr
    Replied to G_Mango

    You can buy reviewers here, it's actually quite a problem on this site. Otherwise, this novel wouldn't be above 2 stars.

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    Game Lord's Cultivation System
    Eastern · Idczhen
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  • Valixiant
    Valixiant1yr
    Replied to Idczhen

    You clearly don't know what "logic" means. You can have logic in a fantasy world. In fact, it's necessary to have a story that is readable. Cultivators cultivate in order to get strength. This is why they are so strong. This is a logical deduction, based on the plot. This is reasonable. If you said by cultivating, they suddenly turn into dragons, this would not be logical, because it doesn't fit in the story. Besides, this argument is pointless to begin with. The guy wasn't a cultivator at the start, just a normal human. The first step to becoming a good writer is to acknowledge your mistakes. If you keep this up, I doubt you will have any good stories.

    "Haha, for this mission, I have played for 5 years with barely any rest for this day to come," Jiang Ming laughed loudly as he couldn't wait for the unknown reward that he was about to receive.
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    Game Lord's Cultivation System
    Eastern · Idczhen
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  • Valixiant
    Valixiant1yr
    Replied to Idczhen

    I don't know how to break this to you, but all GOOD fantasy novels have logic in them. This whole argument is stupid to begin with, I would say you should take some more classes in literature, but considering your lacking common sense in the first place, I doubt that'll do anything.

    "Haha, for this mission, I have played for 5 years with barely any rest for this day to come," Jiang Ming laughed loudly as he couldn't wait for the unknown reward that he was about to receive.
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    Game Lord's Cultivation System
    Eastern · Idczhen
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  • Valixiant
    Valixiant1yr
    Replied to FluffiaBeard

    Now, I'd like you to re-read what you just said, because it literally doesn't make any sense. Unless he is literally spending all day spamming AOE attacks at people who respawn the moment they die, at the same exact spot, this is impossible. Also, "only" 600k people a month? Do you know how much that is? I swear, authors and their readers have no sense for numbers.

    "Haha, for this mission, I have played for 5 years with barely any rest for this day to come," Jiang Ming laughed loudly as he couldn't wait for the unknown reward that he was about to receive.
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    I Just Won't Play By The Book
    Eastern · 7 Percent
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  • Valixiant
    Valixiant1yr
    Posted

    Alright, I'll tell you this much. All the reviews above 3 star are fake, this novel is complete ass. I would rather read MTL than read this, it has some of the most awkward sounding conversations I've ever seen. Not to mention, the main character acts as a edgelord, so it doesn't make any of it any better. It's honestly a disgrace to give the plot a one star. There should be a option for zero. Immediately upon reincarnating into a cultivation world, main character walks into a alchemy place, insults the alchemists there, flexes his knowledge because he is the alchemy god, and impresses a girl there. Jesus christ I couldn't even make it past chapter 4, it was so unbelievably cringy. As for every else? I can't be bothered. This novel is complete ass. Overall, very poor novel. There was no effort given. This is just a very bad version of a face-slapping cookie-cutter cultivation novel.

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    Game Lord's Cultivation System
    Eastern · Idczhen
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  • Valixiant
    Valixiant1yr
    Commented

    Atleast come up with something realistic. This means he killed one person every ~1.5 seconds.

    "Haha, for this mission, I have played for 5 years with barely any rest for this day to come," Jiang Ming laughed loudly as he couldn't wait for the unknown reward that he was about to receive.
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    Game Lord's Cultivation System
    Eastern · Idczhen
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  • Valixiant
    Valixiant1yr
    Posted

    Usually, when I write reviews, I will look at other reviews (positive and negative) in order to consolidate my thoughts. However, with this novel, I can't really find any reviews that have the same problems I have with this novel. First off, let me just say, this novel is pretty good. The pacing, characters, plot, and especially world building, are great. Just these facts alone put this novel far above the large majority of novels on this site. That said, this novel all suffers from a problem that makes it truly great, and it affects the novel quite a bit. I saw another review that describes this novel as a plain glass of water. It's refreshing and tasty for those who haven't had it for awhile, but it makes you want something more. Lets start off with the plot itself. The plot idea is great and unique. However the execution (while above average) was somewhat poor. In most stories, you can feel the rising action and climax. This novels rising action and climax feel almost blurred, and it's hard to tell exactly when they are. This novel gives a constant stream of information to the reader. (As expected of a mystery novel) However, it feels like they just throw more and more information, along with more important information, to represent the rising action. This causes the novel to lack a meaningful form of impact. For example, the ending was volume 1 was supposed to be relatively important in the main character's growth, and is supposed to be somewhat impactful. Due to the execution, it fell short and felt extremely lackluster. To put it in another way, it feels like the plot is constantly stagnating, as if theres supposed to be a "true" rising action, but it never comes. This point reflects on the entire novel in different ways. For example, the character development. This novel, doesn't have a whole lot of it. The main character certainly grows, in the sense of a tree growing taller, rather than a tree growing branches. More and more information is provided about these characters, and their own intricacies. However, once again, none of this is very impactful. Other novels have 1d characters due to the lack of information while only providing key details occasionally. This novel is the opposite. All these characters are unique, but they never truly have the chance to grow in a meaningful way. Like with the plot, this makes it seem like all the characters have yet to be fully fleshed out, and at chapter 1k+, I truly wonder if they ever will. Riding on the previous point, nothing is truly fleshed out. For example, this novel suffers from being relatively linear, especially in it's characters. There are almost zero neutral characters. They are all evil or good. This causes the novel to seem lacking. Referencing my point about plain water, it keeps you feeling like there should be something more. As for the plot armor? It's rather excessive. Due to the main character's personality, he constantly embroils himself in matters way out of his league, yet always survives them. He works terribly hard and gets rather minute gains. I don't mind the fact that the main character is good-natured and gets himself involved in evil plots, it's the fact that the main character constantly says he doesn't want to get involved. This in particular is what annoys me. This changes (somewhat, they kinda just gloss over this aspect in general) later on. Overall, it's a great novel that can be referenced to a plain glass of water. Tasty and refreshing, but leaving you wanting more. This novel definitely needs more impact, as well as fleshing out the story and characters in general.

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    Lord of Mysteries
    Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • Valixiant
    Valixiant1yr
    Posted

    Alright, this is a decent story. Extremely similar to The Legendary Mechanic, except the main character is all in all, a less competent version of the TLM's main character. My main problem with this novel is the constant POV changes. I've read quite a few light novels, and there is a very small number of genre's where a POV change every chapter or two works. This is definitely not one of them. There are far better ways to show the interactions with players and NPC's. In a lot of new novels, I notice POV changes are steadily getting worse, with MANY novels adding these in. Everything else is average. If anything slightly below average, due to how much of this novel seems very similar to TLM. Overall, novel would average, but the POV changes outright ruin it. Theres a POV change every other chapter, it's really annoying. Most people are going to skim through it, causing many readers to potentially miss important information.

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    In the mind of an NPC
    Fantasy · GoGo
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  • Valixiant
    Valixiant1yr
    Posted

    I can't give this a good review. The main character is supposed to be a millenial-old demon, but acts nothing like it. He acts like an abandoned orphan half the time, and for some reason has weirdly-emphatic moments, despite massacring entire species. Writing quality is meh. Average at best. Stability of updates is 1/5. I can't be asked to give a higher star rating for a novel that requires you to pay per chapter. My main problem with this site is very few of these novels deserve money. Character design is pretty poor as well. Main character is something, I guess. No clear personality and it's been thirty-five chapters. Is he some sort of scary demon lord, ruler of billions, destroyer of countries? Or is he some random NEET that reincarnated in a demon lord's body? It could be either, I suppose. The problem with writing characters like this, is that nobody can relate. All of the main character's problems and traumas seem moronic at best. As for the plot? No fucking clue. This novel cut off right at the point where anything meaningful would happen, what a disappointment. It was looking to be somewhat interesting, but then made you pay. However, from the very first interaction with modern-day humans, you can already tell this is going to be a cliche mess. Some modern humans see a guy floating, causing mass-destruction, and moving at inhuman speeds, and the first thing they think is, "oh hes naked, better get some clothes for him?". Overall, novel is a mess in the early stages, and due to the lack of any meaningful non-action chapters, I can only assume that the rest of the novel is a mess as well.

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    The Strongest Demon Lord in the Modern World
    Urban · Shaele
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  • Valixiant
    Valixiant1yr
    Replied to Axes

    There is such a thing called eidetic memory, the ability to recall images with high precision for a brief period of time after seeing it. This is the closest thing to photographic memory, but isn't at all close to what photographic memory is.

    [You can remember anything you have experienced. You just have to shuffle through your memory like files in a cabinet. The one downside is that you remember everything, which includes terrible or scarring events in your life. Beware of sleeping since memories you haven't remembered in a while, have a chance of appearing in your dreams.]
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    The Rise of Quetzalcoatl
    Fantasy · equuip
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  • Valixiant
    Valixiant1yr
    Posted

    Alright, this reminds me of Death by a Thousand Cuts. This novel doesn't have many things that are overly negative, and nothing overly positive. The problem lies in the fact that theres a lot of small plot holes and inconsistences. First off, the plot. Main character receives a system, decides to train in a dungeon before taking revenge. Gets overpowered very quickly, with her emotional state being somewhat unstable. Fairly basic. However, theres so many minor inconsistences, it's ridiculous. The various laws that are talked about aren't very realistic. Prices are even less realistic, and characters reactions are downright unbelievable. Main character goes to a clothing store, employee disdains her, and upon realizing she spent $300 on some baggy sports clothe sets, they suddenly become super respectful? They also start stuttering and becoming nervous as if shes apart of a super big family? As for the characters? Eh. Main character gets bullied from a cliche young master, and takes revenge so fast you quickly realize that everyone is super weak. How strong is the main character? Who knows. However, my least favorite characters are the MC's mother and the ice primordial brave. Okay, MC's mother was the ex-girlfriend of ice brave, and despite the ice brave offering MC's mother help, she declined every time. Because of her constantly denying help, the MC was forced to live in poverty, being tortured both physically and mentally every single day. This pisses me off on another level. Alright, let me just give some backstory before I talk more about the ice brave. Main character is paranoid because of constantly being betrayed, and has trust issues. For some reason, the ice brave literally admits to manipulating her emotions using her power to get close to the main character. The main character, upon hearing this, literally doesn't even care? Is the whole paranoid/trust issues thing just for giggles? The fuck? World background is finicky at best. Many things don't make much sense, and aren't explained that well. I have no idea if this is a post-apocalyptic world, or a technologically advanced world. The author has described it being both. It barely feels like a technologically advanced world due to it lacking anything technologically advanced. Power scaling in this novel straight up sucks. The main character evaluates her power at a C-rank dungeon runner. (Goes from F - S) Not too long after this, she kills a bunch of guards/assassins of a few major families and leaves them defenseless? Can any C-rank dungeon runner do this? If so, the whole plot falls apart before it even started. Overall, this novel is extremely inconsistent. There is a severe lack of explanations in a lot of things, causing the world background to seem very poor. This also causes the pacing to be extremely fast. Many things don't make sense, and the characters are rather poor.

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    The Rise of Quetzalcoatl
    Fantasy · equuip
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  • Valixiant
    Valixiant1yr
    Commented

    What a wonderful way to calm someone down thats paranoid... By manipulating their emotions...

    "I slowed down your body. This not only slows down your aging process but your nervous system. All I did was slow down all the parts of your brain that produced negative emotions such as fear, disgust, anger, and more. I didn't slow down the positive emotions which are why you can only feel either no emotions or happy emotions now.
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    The Rise of Quetzalcoatl
    Fantasy · equuip
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  • Valixiant
    Valixiant1yr
    Replied to Daoist0AmfrA

    1 pound of wagyu steak is $200. I would presume that with dungeons making the world more dangerous expensive food like wagyu would only go up in price.

    I complied and pressed yes, paying for the 245 dollars worth of food. I was currently stuffed to the brim and wanted to get some pajamas before going to sleep.
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    The Rise of Quetzalcoatl
    Fantasy · equuip
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  • Valixiant
    Valixiant1yr
    Commented

    This seems kinda nonsensical. If it was this easy to grasp "bloodlust" then why would anyone be afraid of non-boss monsters?

    Finally, my bloodlust. I was able to grasp enough bloodlust to cause most wolves to fear me and back away, but not enough to make them pass out. This meant I should be able to scare off some of the weaker humans which put a smile on my face.
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    The Rise of Quetzalcoatl
    Fantasy · equuip
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  • Valixiant
    Valixiant1yr
    Replied to Axes

    Well considering photographic memory doesn't exist in the first place, it doesn't make much sense to compare it to a regular humans memory.

    [You can remember anything you have experienced. You just have to shuffle through your memory like files in a cabinet. The one downside is that you remember everything, which includes terrible or scarring events in your life. Beware of sleeping since memories you haven't remembered in a while, have a chance of appearing in your dreams.]
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    The Rise of Quetzalcoatl
    Fantasy · equuip
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  • Valixiant
    Valixiant1yr
    Commented

    "becoming corrupted." People have desired things beyond the mortal realm for thousands of years, what do you mean they are "becoming corrupted"?

    The only problem was that humans were becoming corrupted. They reverted back to their normal human nature… greed. They wanted more than just floating cars and the cure to cancer but what was beyond the mortal realm.
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    The Rise of Quetzalcoatl
    Fantasy · equuip
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  • Valixiant
    Valixiant1yr
    Posted

    Alrighty, this is a solid meh for me. The idea was pretty good, I've seen a few others that are similar but I think this one is better. However, it does have some problems. The main problem this novel has is how ridiculously slow it is. The story surrounding the first two wielders were okay, but once the main character found the third wielder it became super slow. I'm skimming the novel and I still find it excruciatingly slow. Ten or so chapters can go by and nothing really important will happen. Meaningless fights are several chapters long. Arguably the worst part is the POV changes. Theres so many problems with that. Other people's POV lasts so long. Furthermore, upon switching POV's, it will essentially just be repeating events that already happened from a different POV before continuing. Story development is meh. Story takes far too long for anything meaningful to happen. They foreshadow various things, but so far haven't capitalized on anything. As for the characters? Average at best. No matter how many skills the main character gets, it never really feels like hes improving. Side characters are meh. Theres nothing particularly interesting about any of them. The main character's students are average, if not 2d. Once again, I'd just like to point out how much exposition dumping and meaningless filler is included in this novel. Usually, most novels would stop exposition dumping at the start, but this novel never really does. It constantly re-explains stuff, to the point of it be repetitive. Overall, too slow to be enjoyable, especially considering this is a action novel. Fights are boring and almost all of them feel like filler. Everything else is average or below-average.

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    I Reincarnated as a Shinai
    Fantasy · xlntz
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