HouseOfLee
Author here, this novel has plenty of dark scenarios that shows the conflict of the world, and how cruel things can be. The MC tends to grow up around a lot of negativity, however he tries his hardest to still enjoy his life through it all. You can expect great plot, World building, and lore. I hope you all enjoy!
This story is fast-paced and enjoyable. The main character Godfrey is well-developed and it's always great to get insight into his thought processes. Parts of the world feel akin to generic fantasy from what I've read of the first five chapters but I feel that there is potential for the world to become more interesting as the story goes on. This story is also well-written with little to no grammar errors.
Pretty fast paced in beginning, and that’s fine. The world building and how the magic works here in the world makes up for that, and the dark scenarios and crazy lore and plot twists gets me so intrigued in the story. After chapter 5, things start getting crazy! I love this story, please keep writing!
"Akira Sajuri's reincarnation as Godfrey in a new world is a fascinating journey, showcasing the harsh realities faced by commoners. The contrast between the small town and the wealthy Atlantis City adds depth to the story. It would be interesting to see how Godfrey navigates through the societal challenges and influences the lives of those around him."
This story was written in a first person point of view with little to no grammar issues. No unnecessary monologue and expositions either. It was straight to the point with just the right amount of chapter length. Not too short. Not too long either. And if you like the classic transmigration stories then it might be for you.