Not Apple
i wanted to finish the trial read before writing a review but I could not wait any longer, the idea is good, beinh the head of an organisation gives a special starting point, but It seems mc is just solving all the problems, the mc made a statement about being a programmer but no input of any thing programming related( mage programmer I mean) the device was not actually made by him, the organization feels like they are having some reduced intelligence. the planning and marketing there is just skimmed over, it made mention of it being a dangerous or not friendly world and espionage was not considered?., security was not pointed out. so it needs more development.
The main character is all shaft and no balls. Everything is handed to him on a silver platter through through the system. He lets his subordinates Do whatever they want and never Even make them respect him. It's just constantly him getting something from the system, He hands it to them, They don't think it's real and test him, They realize it's real and then they just listen to everything he says.
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I've read some comments. People are crazy, worrying about a character destroying a culture by bringing ours to them. People this is just a story, FICTION! It's meant for entertainment, to get your imagination juices flowing, stop overanalyzing. Imagine this was real, poof, your in a different world. This world is not technologically developed like ours. You really want me to believe you wouldn't try and use knowledge from our world to make a place for yourself in this new world just to preserve their innocence?! Yeah, right, ok, uh-huh, I believe you, NOT! ๐