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Reviews of I Invented Smartphone In A Magical World

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I Invented Smartphone In A Magical World

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EternalAngel
EternalAngelLv6EternalAngel

Raw link plz ๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ™‚โ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™ƒ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿคช๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜Šโ˜บ๏ธ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜˜

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criticalmind
criticalmindLv6criticalmind

So boring. They just jump into a boardroom meeting and the MC already has his cheat and is blasting other people for their lack of creativity. We have no context and no reason to root for the MC other than the fact that he has a "system"

Blackjack13
Blackjack13Lv13Blackjack13

I'm really looking forward for this, because the MC's going to invent a phone in an another world.๐Ÿ˜ I hope this gets a comic after a few chapters released.

heli
heliLv15heli

i wanted to finish the trial read before writing a review but I could not wait any longer, the idea is good, beinh the head of an organisation gives a special starting point, but It seems mc is just solving all the problems, the mc made a statement about being a programmer but no input of any thing programming related( mage programmer I mean) the device was not actually made by him, the organization feels like they are having some reduced intelligence. the planning and marketing there is just skimmed over, it made mention of it being a dangerous or not friendly world and espionage was not considered?., security was not pointed out. so it needs more development.

DattaRaviTejaG
DattaRaviTejaGLv13DattaRaviTejaG

Don't be fooled by the synopsis.. It's a system that hands down everything to the MC. fake fake fake fake fake fake fake fake fake fake fake

Bofhen
BofhenLv15Bofhen

A worse version of Bringing Culture into another world instead of this novel just pick up Bringing Culture into another world a gene seriously...

Sin_of_GREED
Sin_of_GREEDLv13Sin_of_GREED

it just trash ,so many times u would feel why f is this happening or something not happening illogically .

Anarook_tylde
Anarook_tyldeLv13Anarook_tylde

The main character is all shaft and no balls. Everything is handed to him on a silver platter through through the system. He lets his subordinates Do whatever they want and never Even make them respect him. It's just constantly him getting something from the system, He hands it to them, They don't think it's real and test him, They realize it's real and then they just listen to everything he says.

JohnDeuz
JohnDeuzLv12JohnDeuz

SCAM!!!! ...................................................................................................................................

tahkimy
tahkimyLv15tahkimy

this one actually pretty good, you guys need to read the novel first don't mind some of the bad review. Hopefully this one get picked.......

Dragon_5081
Dragon_5081Lv2Dragon_5081

It's just bringing culture into another world just like 10 times worse. It'll be pretty sad if this gets translated and culture into another world never comes back.

snow_empresssoul
snow_empresssoulLv4snow_empresssoul

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Chepoy_
Chepoy_Lv2Chepoy_

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Jim_Yurgilevich
Jim_YurgilevichLv15Jim_Yurgilevich

I've read some comments. People are crazy, worrying about a character destroying a culture by bringing ours to them. People this is just a story, FICTION! It's meant for entertainment, to get your imagination juices flowing, stop overanalyzing. Imagine this was real, poof, your in a different world. This world is not technologically developed like ours. You really want me to believe you wouldn't try and use knowledge from our world to make a place for yourself in this new world just to preserve their innocence?! Yeah, right, ok, uh-huh, I believe you, NOT! ๐Ÿ˜‚

SleepyLibrarian
SleepyLibrarianLv15SleepyLibrarian

This has potential. Always curious to see what the MC would introduce to the world next. Really hope this novel would get chosen. (Anyone know where I can find the raws?)

LordCrunchyPine
LordCrunchyPineLv13LordCrunchyPine

nice one. xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp

uflesh940
uflesh940Lv3uflesh940

This novel is just so incredibly boring. The MC just sits in his little factory and talks about smartphones. That's all he's done for the ENTIRE novel. Tell me about the magic, tell me about the setting, tell me about the MC, just STOP TALKING ABOUT SMARTPHONES 24/7!

ElG0hary
ElG0haryLv5ElG0hary

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