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Review Detail of heli in I Invented Smartphone In A Magical World

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i wanted to finish the trial read before writing a review but I could not wait any longer, the idea is good, beinh the head of an organisation gives a special starting point, but It seems mc is just solving all the problems, the mc made a statement about being a programmer but no input of any thing programming related( mage programmer I mean) the device was not actually made by him, the organization feels like they are having some reduced intelligence. the planning and marketing there is just skimmed over, it made mention of it being a dangerous or not friendly world and espionage was not considered?., security was not pointed out. so it needs more development.

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I Invented Smartphone In A Magical World

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