Reviews of I Dare Not Hope

I liked how the story starts with a cute child and how the author takes us through the life of the MC beautiful. The author has a good writing skills. I read the first chapter and couldn’t find any mistakes. Keep up the good work !

Writing Quality: The writing in the beginning seems a like it is a bit unstable and needs proofreading, but by the current chapter the situation has improved a lot.5. Stability of Updates: every 2 days it seems: 5. Story Development: Lots of crazy things happen. You'll need to read it yourself to find out. 5. Character Design: For a romance novel, the some of the characters manage to break the mold in a good way. It makes the story development more interesting to read as well. However, I feel like the writing style sometimes does not pair well with the first person style of writing. There could be some improvement in making the main character's personality come out more in the narration. 4. World Background: The world isn't as interesting because it's a romance novel. Though this is made up by the good character design, by itself it is a 3.

HEY BISHOPPP! When i got into it it seemed like a typical romance or cinderella story ngl, just with modern twists but as i went on i read how amazingly the character of Scarlet was explored and portrayed, connected me to her adventurous side and wow. shes a fricking winner, all the best hope more people read it !

I really enjoyed reading this book. it was a great read and a page turning. This book is really beautiful In all ways possible. I'm quite glad to have found such a book on this platform. Great job author 👍

Though only 5 chapters in, I am CAPTIVATED by the story so far! This is definitely a page turner. With the intriguing womanizer love interest to the fiery MC, I am in love with these characters personalities and how different they are from each other. The Author does an astounding job with details, the hook, and storyline so far. Though I have spotted some grammatical errors, those can be easily overlooked and fixed. The sentence structure is sound and the paragraphs flow with each other through each chapter, making this Novel an easy-on-the-eyes read. The chapter lengths are great compared to other Novels I've read which ties a big red bow on top of a glorious book. This Novel is a hidden gem of sorts that lacks the attention it deserves. Author, I wish you the best of luck with future chapters and I will definitely be keeping tabs on this book, reading further on my free time. [img=recommend][img=update] You've earned another reader!

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The cover page is really original and catchy! Like it so much. The story line is interesting, the characters also. You're doing a good job!

Hi author! I did not really get what was the purpose at first but of course as I read through, I'm starting to get the gist of it. There were scenes where the reading flow was cut off but I managed through. I look forward to further improvement and seeing you smooth your story out! waiting for more chapters~

really great story. interesting characters and background right from the start. had to read the first couple of chapters in one go. the mc is goals.

I'm in love with your book, I dont know why but I your story is very captivating, the world definitely needs more writers like you... keep up the good work okay😊😊

Despite the rough around the edge beginning, once you get about 3-4 chapters in, the writing flows much smoother. The FL is likable for me but I can’t say for the ML yet. There are a few bits I think be improved however: 1. Grammar— There weren’t that many to be honest; only the occassional misspellings, missing commas in listing, or missing commas in between adjectives ( if I were to be specific ) 2. Initial Chapters— The beginning was a bit cliche, and I found it a bit rough to read. So my advice is to comb through the beginning chapters as it is the most important part in order to attract readers. Another good point is to make it more intriguing, forcing any reader to keep going till your latest chapter ! 3. Character— While I have mentioned this before, I do want to emphasize that some might not like how weak she is to the ML. Feels like the typical bad boy romance, which may turn away a few. Maybe give her at least a redeeming characteristic. However, this third issue is totally my opinion. You don’t need to change the storyline bc of it. All in all though, I found this a comfortable read as I sip my nonexistent tea. Keep up the good work, Author !

I enjoy this sort of intense ones once in a while and I'm looking forward to continuing to read it, from what I can see this book has incredible potential and I hope the author continues to keep up the excellent work all the best!

Hi Author! So, I like your writing style it makes it more appealing and easier for the readers to understand it. The character design is built well, that I was immersed in reading. Overall, a great novel for me! Keep up the good work, Author!

It was an interesting story, I could even put my shoes into her position because of your writing style is easy to understand, good job! [img=recommend]

it's fun, it's exciting, mysterious and I want more. I can't wait to see how this story develops. the 2nd and 3rd chapters were a bit fast paced but I hope it slows down a bit in the later chapter. I'm just super excited soi had to review this now before I forget👍👍👍

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