Review Detail of Glenstonx in I Dare Not Hope

Item: I Dare Not Hope
Rating: 4.2

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GlenstonxLv23yrGlenstonx

Hi author! I did not really get what was the purpose at first but of course as I read through, I'm starting to get the gist of it. There were scenes where the reading flow was cut off but I managed through. I look forward to further improvement and seeing you smooth your story out! waiting for more chapters~

I Dare Not Hope

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bishop1275Authorbishop1275

I appreciate your feedback. I really had a hard time starting this book. I already rewritten this first chapter several times, I could not get the exact feel that I want for the start. Your comment really inspired me with another idea. Thanks for a nice review.

3yr