Review Detail of SolAce in I Dare Not Hope
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Despite the rough around the edge beginning, once you get about 3-4 chapters in, the writing flows much smoother. The FL is likable for me but I can’t say for the ML yet. There are a few bits I think be improved however: 1. Grammar— There weren’t that many to be honest; only the occassional misspellings, missing commas in listing, or missing commas in between adjectives ( if I were to be specific ) 2. Initial Chapters— The beginning was a bit cliche, and I found it a bit rough to read. So my advice is to comb through the beginning chapters as it is the most important part in order to attract readers. Another good point is to make it more intriguing, forcing any reader to keep going till your latest chapter ! 3. Character— While I have mentioned this before, I do want to emphasize that some might not like how weak she is to the ML. Feels like the typical bad boy romance, which may turn away a few. Maybe give her at least a redeeming characteristic. However, this third issue is totally my opinion. You don’t need to change the storyline bc of it. All in all though, I found this a comfortable read as I sip my nonexistent tea. Keep up the good work, Author !
I Dare Not Hope
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Wow, I really like you. I am still trying to figure out my style of writing, so I appreciate all the inputs you shared. I like that you pinpointed even the smallest mistakes in my work. I believe it is quite difficult to proofread and criticize my own work. It would certainly help me improve as a new writer. I enjoyed every minute I put on this story and in their characters, so unfortunately, I don't want to change anything about it as of the moment, but maybe if you would like to read further, you might find something else you might like. I will take note of the beginning of the story and think about it. I really appreciate your effort to give me such a nice review. My only wish is for you to continue enjoying it while relaxing.