Reviews of I Created A Dungeon In A Cultivation World
I Created A Dungeon In A Cultivation World
BLACKangelmarl
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Hello, shameless author here, I'm not a Chinese so this will be a little different from you typical Xianxia novels. That's all, also give me a review if you happen to like it.
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The premise was great, but then author decided to make the MC a villain who commit nedless cruel actions and make bad choices for the sake of looking evil. For example he choose an evil cultivator he had just seen as his subordinate to manage a city, when he could have saved the city lord, who looked like a trustworthy person and had more experience with managing people. Another thing I disliked is the total massacre. Read some others dungeon novels, it makes no sense for the death rate to be that high. Who would want to enter a dungeon where armies get decimated? Humans are greedy, but not that stupid. And sometimes the same rules you made for the tower don't works for the sake of plot. For example when the experience didn't get absorbed immediately by the city lord or when the evil cultivator absorbed the experience from the monsters someone else killed; among these monster there was also one with one layer lower, but you previously said that one could absorb experience only from monster with the same or higher cultivation. There are many other little things i disliked and i truly think it is a pity that this story took such a turn.
Great idea bad execution. MC is a one dimensional edge lord. So far there is no discernable motivation for the MC. The MC is needlessly vicious when there is no need for it. As I already said, the idea is great. If it was a better fleshed out story it could have been great, despite the lackluster writing quality.
I must say the story line is great. I love the idea of a dungeon-style cultivation novel. I don't think I have read anything like it before. The only downside I have seen so far is the grammar, a bit. I see you use present tense and not past tense a lot. That affects reading as I feel that the way the MC is talking isn't right. Maybe use past tense in the future. Other than that, I like it. Keep up the good work.
Everything was going good but the quality keeps decreasing now that it feels like chapters are MTL or maybe just summary like in around ~50+ chapters, English is alright, not much character or World development and also dungeon development is rushed or skipped now...... [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
Up to date with the released chapters. The story is good but there have been more flaws as we keep on moving forward. 1) Poor grammar, but readable. 2) Too much information overload in some parts, but makes sense. 3) Too much cringe lines. 4) MC thinking the subordinates can betray him and doesn't want to trust the system too much, when it is literally the system giving him everything. 5) MC gets soul coins from killing other beings, but in recent chaps(specially in the forbidden areas part), he gets no soul coins from killing so many powerful cultivators. 6) MC taking risks for no reason, like he accompanied Isadora to unknown regions when he was just at Golden Core, then goes on to fight Core Formation Tree God when there was risk of failure. Why the heck would the author make MC go out when he doesn't have information on those parts. He could just wait and upgrade his strength and slowly scout out the regions through his subordinates. It is readable, but there are many things that could be improved.
Good idea of a dungeon in a cultivation,world ,i like it and decent execution, not many typos unlike my review but i dont like that the author makes stuff up that never happen, things are going super fast, the chapters are so short, i read 50 chapters in an hour, characters and background are ok decent read, but definitely not a top novel out there, ill probably finish using the free trial i like it but won't continue reading
It's alright.The main issue for me is the change in writing style. In later chapters it's written in such a melodramatic way. For example a character will be fighting to save a city and it will say, "She must retain her boundless resolve to sacrifice herself for justice. The fate of the world depended on her and she must not falter." Then it will keep going like that for 2 or 3 paragraphs before doing any fighting. It also began to focus mostly on everyone except the main character. It's not unreasonable given the setup of the MC staying behind the scenes in his dungeon, but I liked how Top Tier Providence balanced that better.Except... the other characters are actually more interesting than the MC and his subordinates. Because the MC and his crew become cardboard cutouts who pretty much only say cringe and cliche villain lines.
