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The premise was great, but then author decided to make the MC a villain who commit nedless cruel actions and make bad choices for the sake of looking evil. For example he choose an evil cultivator he had just seen as his subordinate to manage a city, when he could have saved the city lord, who looked like a trustworthy person and had more experience with managing people. Another thing I disliked is the total massacre. Read some others dungeon novels, it makes no sense for the death rate to be that high. Who would want to enter a dungeon where armies get decimated? Humans are greedy, but not that stupid. And sometimes the same rules you made for the tower don't works for the sake of plot. For example when the experience didn't get absorbed immediately by the city lord or when the evil cultivator absorbed the experience from the monsters someone else killed; among these monster there was also one with one layer lower, but you previously said that one could absorb experience only from monster with the same or higher cultivation. There are many other little things i disliked and i truly think it is a pity that this story took such a turn.

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Yeah this story has too many plot holes. And mc is beyond a fool. He acts like a kid. I don't even understand his choices most of the time... Why are you doing it? Even you are evil and want to increase your strength faster... Why you will take risk without knowing everything?Mc is a total idot beyond repair.